First Kiss

First Kiss

A Poem by Sandra K
"

The moment dawned onto me a few days ago.

"

 

 

Young and naïve.

Scared to death,

If this moment would

Even go right.

 

 

Deeply in love,

With this boy

And wondering

When and Who

Is going to make

The move.

 

Within a flash,

And in lasting of a few seconds,

The deed was done.

 

Sweet and moist

Texture of the act.

Just barley a full kiss.

But it happened and

The moment was gold!

It was the moment of her

First kiss

xoxo

© 2008 Sandra K


Author's Note

Sandra K
I did this the other night. What do you think?

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Oh, how I wish my first kiss was so splendid! I loved this piece. You do a fine job at describing the anxiety one feels when put in such a situation. Good work.

Posted 12 Years Ago


This is a great description of a first kiss! You really capture the hesitation, the fear, the excitement... it's a great description and a great topic for a poem. Well done!

Posted 12 Years Ago


i hope my first kiss is this nice. (yeah, i haven't kissed a girl yet. pathetic, isn't it?)

(you're pretty, by the way. eek.)

Posted 12 Years Ago


I liked this. My first kiss wasn't as great. Braces = kissing no-no.

Posted 12 Years Ago


"Just barely a full kiss.
But it happened..."

I liked that line =)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Captivating little composition, encapsulating a romantically nostalgic moment in time, with a few, but poignant lines of verse (from a young girl's heart).

Extremely well composed!

God's Blessing
Phillozofee

Posted 12 Years Ago


Such a soft innocence about this, moving gently toward this most thrilling of moments... Loved your tender approach to something so life changing! Excellent!!!

Posted 12 Years Ago


I like it.....it realli captures the essence of a first kiss.....lol
Come read my journal entry on my page....!

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Sandra K
Sandra K

Valley of the Sun, AZ



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Hello! I am Sandra Gustafson. I am in my early twenties. I am a mother to a beautiful little boy, who stole my heart and will keep it forever. I am open minded young woman. I have been told I am wise.. more..

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