Rain

My first haiku...if it is not one please let me know..

Rain on sheeted roof, 

Thundering steps in its fall 

I lie in tranced still...

Author's Note

Like always.. review please

Reviews

[Crimson_Catastrophe]

It's mellow, soft, and interesting.
I like it.
It has a good vibe. Keep writing!

[Madeline Armstrong]

Haikus normally follow the 5-7-5 structure; five syllables first line, seven following, and five ending the poem. However, I liked the feeling your poem emitted!

[PoeticVandal]

what about the 3-5-3 routine? I've heard of that.. And thank you

[Madeline Armstrong]

When you write a haiku, there is a typical structure the syllables should follow. The first line should have five syllables: "The trees blow softly". The second line should have seven: "Their colours change with season". The third should have five syllables: "Capture the beauty".