Rain

Rain

A Poem by PoeticVandal
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My first haiku...if it is not one please let me know..

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Rain on sheeted roof, 
Thundering steps in its fall 
I lie in tranced still...

© 2015 PoeticVandal


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PoeticVandal
Like always.. review please

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It's mellow, soft, and interesting.
I like it.
It has a good vibe. Keep writing!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Haikus normally follow the 5-7-5 structure; five syllables first line, seven following, and five ending the poem. However, I liked the feeling your poem emitted!

Posted 6 Years Ago


PoeticVandal

6 Years Ago

what about the 3-5-3 routine? I've heard of that.. And thank you
Madeline Armstrong

6 Years Ago

When you write a haiku, there is a typical structure the syllables should follow. The first line sho.. read more

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Added on December 30, 2012
Last Updated on November 5, 2015
Tags: rain, haiku

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PoeticVandal
PoeticVandal

Dubai, Karama, United Arab Emirates



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I began writing almost 5 years ago, but not as much as i have in the past year or so.. Though I may have years behind me, I am but a hatch-ling in the world of writing...... That being said, please r.. more..

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