Angel's whisper

Angel's whisper

A Poem by PoeticVandal
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A poem about conscience....

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A tiny innocent voice,
Riding the winds of the mind.
It fights the turbulence of temptation,
Teaching us to be truthful and kind.
In the face of failure it has cried many a time,
It cries not for itself but for another.
Who by ignoring its voice have fallen,
Burned by the inferno of desire.
Its prickly stab shows us,
That we have strayed from a divine road.
All it does is advise us,
For it is the wisdom that God bestowed.
Its stays by our side forever,
Like an angel's sweet whisper.....

© 2013 PoeticVandal


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Incredible poem! I love the emotion that comes out of this piece! Great work!!

Posted 9 Years Ago


PoeticVandal

9 Years Ago

Thank You
A poem about the voice of the self conscious,the voice that actually defines the goodness in human beings.Very well thought and neatly written poem.I enjoyed reading this piece.Thanks for sharing.

Posted 9 Years Ago


This is quite lovely...nice read.

Posted 9 Years Ago


brilliant - i liked it! a great way to express how our conscience pricks us every time we take a wrong turn. 'Angel Whisper" - i liked that name, it does well for conscience. we often ignore it, its just a whisper after all , its easy to forget it some times - that is, until "Its prickly stab shows us,
That we have strayed from a divine road."
good one :D

Posted 9 Years Ago



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PoeticVandal
PoeticVandal

Dubai, Karama, United Arab Emirates



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I began writing almost 5 years ago, but not as much as i have in the past year or so.. Though I may have years behind me, I am but a hatch-ling in the world of writing...... That being said, please r.. more..

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