Idle Swing

Idle Swing

A Poem by PoeticVandal

Moonlit sky glows anight, 
Eerie cast on lonely swing, 
Sends chills down the spine....

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How you managed to create such a vivid scene in my mind using so few words amazes me but I saw it so clearly that it was downright freaky. Almost made me shiver a little at the end but I caught myself. It is interesting though, all the different ideas that popped into my mind that might cause that little chill on a night lit by a moon...

Posted 9 Years Ago

This is really cool. I like it. Nice writing.

Posted 9 Years Ago

I like how well you bring the deep emotion into this piece with just a few words! Nice work!!

Posted 9 Years Ago

Wow! I loved this! Thanks so much for not keeping this to yourself, Mind checking out some of my stuff? thanks

Posted 9 Years Ago

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yeah,..i feel that

nice job

Posted 9 Years Ago

as i read these lines, i imagined it all - dark night, a full moon - a lonely swing in a clearing, outlined in silver by the moon, all else in darkness.... yea even i felt a chill down my spine!

Posted 9 Years Ago

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6 Reviews
Added on January 8, 2013
Last Updated on February 7, 2022
Tags: night, moonlight, swing



Dubai, Karama, United Arab Emirates

I began writing almost 5 years ago, but not as much as i have in the past year or so.. Though I may have years behind me, I am but a hatch-ling in the world of writing...... That being said, please r.. more..


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