Left here to Die.

Left here to Die.

A Poem by Sanjh
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A sad romantic song on betrayal

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The pain in my heart,
Was not in my destiny...
The tears in my eyes,
Were not meant for me...
This life of sadness,
Is not what i asked for....
Yeah you sold out your heart,
And it was never me...

 

I took the pain of your share,
and every last one of your tears...
I took the darkness away,
But it's all my cries that now I hear...
And you were never mine,
But yet you always kept on lying...
Yeah this pain was meant for you,
And now you've left me here for dying...
And now you've left me here for dying...

 

This fear in my soul,
I never felt it before...
Always thinking of you,
Is burning me more...
There's storm in my head,
n all the pain in the store...
It cries out your name ,
But there are so many doors...

 

I gave you that smile on your face,
And took your pain with all the grace...
And I let you fly like a kite,
And you left me in this place...
But then you went away too far,
N I was waiting for all the night...
I kept on trying to bring you back,
With all the heart n all my might...
I kept on praying to the divine,
Hoping all the wrongs would change to right...
And you were never ever mine,
But yet you always kept on lying...
Yeah this pain was meant for you,
And now you've left me here for dying...
And now you've left me here for dying...

© 2014 Sanjh


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Sanjh
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Sometimes selfless love is not returned as selflessly as it deserves to be. And that brings on pain and a lasting sadness. You have done wonders with the expression of that pain here Sanjh. Life is not fair but it is all we have. Thanks for sharing your feelings.

Posted 6 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Sanjh

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much Divya...:)
DIVYA

6 Years Ago

My pleasure Sanjh. Let's keep writing and sharing. :)



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I just totally feel this as a song - the pacing of the lines, the theme of betrayal, and the repeating line all remind me of a blues song, or country-blues. The theme that what is happening was meant for the other, not the one writing, feels real and authentic- that confusion- this isn't my destiny you inflicted the pain- it's meant for you not me is a strong feeling that includes so any emotions. Brutal kind of love that leaves you there dying . . . Nice work. Thank you.

Posted 5 Years Ago


I like this. It reminds me of a song. It has so much pain dripping from each word. I like those poems the best.

Posted 5 Years Ago


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SKY
Hard to rewind the beautiful moments of your life. Love hurts whenever a heart is broken!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sanjh

6 Years Ago

Yes, it hurts like hell but life goes on and time heals everything, almost. Thanks for appreciating... read more
SKY

6 Years Ago

You're welcome friend!
Its not a very good feeling to have someone step all over your heart and leave the bruises on a broken heart. But life has a way of surprising us, bringing us a new light with strength and beauty.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sanjh

6 Years Ago

True words, everything that hurts just makes us more stronger. Thanks for reading. :)
Nice song, I love it and it's very meaningful! :D

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sanjh

6 Years Ago

I'm glad you liked it Lyndy, Thanks. :)
Fabulous write, emotions flowing. I really felt the frustration, thanks for sharing.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sanjh

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much James. :)
nice poem :)
Emotions expressed beautifully..


Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sanjh

6 Years Ago

Thanks Sayantani. :)
I feel like some of the lines were a little lacking rhythm, and were a tad awkward, but other than that I thought it was decent. Keep on writing and hone your craft.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sanjh

6 Years Ago

Thank you for appreciating Nichole, I'll try my best to improve. :)
Wow this was good. Loved it!!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sanjh

6 Years Ago

Thanks for appreciating...:)
Love is giving everything and expecting nothing. . If you really love someone, let them go, if they come back, they are yours forever, if they don't, they never were... :).. We have to accept this and move on. . I really liked the poem, it's quite powerful. . A really good write :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sanjh

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much...:)

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