Left here to Die.

A sad romantic song on betrayal

The pain in my heart,
Was not in my destiny...
The tears in my eyes,
Were not meant for me...
This life of sadness,
Is not what i asked for....
Yeah you sold out your heart,
And it was never me...

 

I took the pain of your share,
and every last one of your tears...
I took the darkness away,
But it's all my cries that now I hear...
And you were never mine,
But yet you always kept on lying...
Yeah this pain was meant for you,
And now you've left me here for dying...
And now you've left me here for dying...

 

This fear in my soul,
I never felt it before...
Always thinking of you,
Is burning me more...
There's storm in my head,
n all the pain in the store...
It cries out your name ,
But there are so many doors...

 

I gave you that smile on your face,
And took your pain with all the grace...
And I let you fly like a kite,
And you left me in this place...
But then you went away too far,
N I was waiting for all the night...
I kept on trying to bring you back,
With all the heart n all my might...
I kept on praying to the divine,
Hoping all the wrongs would change to right...
And you were never ever mine,
But yet you always kept on lying...
Yeah this pain was meant for you,
And now you've left me here for dying...
And now you've left me here for dying...

Author's Note

Kindly review it.

Reviews

[DIVYA]

Sometimes selfless love is not returned as selflessly as it deserves to be. And that brings on pain and a lasting sadness. You have done wonders with the expression of that pain here Sanjh. Life is not fair but it is all we have. Thanks for sharing your feelings.

[Sanjh]

Thank you so much Divya...:)

[DIVYA]

My pleasure Sanjh. Let's keep writing and sharing. :)

[Kerra]

I can feel this write, emotional. I know this at times as life isn't always fair.

[Marianne Rose]

I just totally feel this as a song - the pacing of the lines, the theme of betrayal, and the repeating line all remind me of a blues song, or country-blues. The theme that what is happening was meant for the other, not the one writing, feels real and authentic- that confusion- this isn't my destiny you inflicted the pain- it's meant for you not me is a strong feeling that includes so any emotions. Brutal kind of love that leaves you there dying . . . Nice work. Thank you.

[Kena Dawn Augustine]

I like this. It reminds me of a song. It has so much pain dripping from each word. I like those poems the best.

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Hard to rewind the beautiful moments of your life. Love hurts whenever a heart is broken!

[Sanjh]

Yes, it hurts like hell but life goes on and time heals everything, almost. Thanks for appreciating. :)

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

You're welcome friend!

[LadyNaida]

Its not a very good feeling to have someone step all over your heart and leave the bruises on a broken heart. But life has a way of surprising us, bringing us a new light with strength and beauty.

[Sanjh]

True words, everything that hurts just makes us more stronger. Thanks for reading. :)

[Lyndy]

Nice song, I love it and it's very meaningful! :D

[Sanjh]

I'm glad you liked it Lyndy, Thanks. :)

[Jamestown]

Fabulous write, emotions flowing. I really felt the frustration, thanks for sharing.

[Sanjh]

Thank you so much James. :)

[Sayantani N]

nice poem :)
Emotions expressed beautifully..

[Sanjh]

Thanks Sayantani. :)

[NicholeHemstock]

I feel like some of the lines were a little lacking rhythm, and were a tad awkward, but other than that I thought it was decent. Keep on writing and hone your craft.

[Sanjh]

Thank you for appreciating Nichole, I'll try my best to improve. :)

[Crazycatgirl_10]

Wow this was good. Loved it!!

[Sanjh]

Thanks for appreciating...:)