Left here to Die.

A sad romantic song on betrayal

The pain in my heart,
Was not in my destiny...
The tears in my eyes,
Were not meant for me...
This life of sadness,
Is not what i asked for....
Yeah you sold out your heart,
And it was never me...

 

I took the pain of your share,
and every last one of your tears...
I took the darkness away,
But it's all my cries that now I hear...
And you were never mine,
But yet you always kept on lying...
Yeah this pain was meant for you,
And now you've left me here for dying...
And now you've left me here for dying...

 

This fear in my soul,
I never felt it before...
Always thinking of you,
Is burning me more...
There's storm in my head,
n all the pain in the store...
It cries out your name ,
But there are so many doors...

 

I gave you that smile on your face,
And took your pain with all the grace...
And I let you fly like a kite,
And you left me in this place...
But then you went away too far,
N I was waiting for all the night...
I kept on trying to bring you back,
With all the heart n all my might...
I kept on praying to the divine,
Hoping all the wrongs would change to right...
And you were never ever mine,
But yet you always kept on lying...
Yeah this pain was meant for you,
And now you've left me here for dying...
And now you've left me here for dying...

Author's Note

Kindly review it.

Reviews

[DIVYA]

Sometimes selfless love is not returned as selflessly as it deserves to be. And that brings on pain and a lasting sadness. You have done wonders with the expression of that pain here Sanjh. Life is not fair but it is all we have. Thanks for sharing your feelings.

[Sanjh]

Thank you so much Divya...:)

[DIVYA]

My pleasure Sanjh. Let's keep writing and sharing. :)

[armin]

fine write, precisely sounded like song lyrics. The words were simple like every break up song.
Maybe some more efforts could take it much higher.
Have a nice time writing.

[Daisy]

sometimes we don't love we need them mistook for love and think to be left dying
a very important sentiment to tell we need you ........
its a very nice poem

[Sanjh]

Thank you so much Daisy...:)

[Ragini]

Beautifully written. You know, I can almost imagine this as a song, it has that feel. Anyway, great writing. :)

[Sanjh]

Thank you so much Ragini, and it is a song...:)

[Ragini]

Oh, does it have a tune set to it? :P

[Sanjh]

Yes, it sure have...:)

[Hailey noice]

I like the poam, you are writing from the heart and that will take you far.

[Sanjh]

Thank you so much Hailey...:)

[Hailey noice]

Your welcome you should go full time.

[Sanjh]

May be someday. I've just started poetry, I'm learning everyday...:)

[Hailey noice]

I am a writer to. But not poams I am a novelist writer of novels.

[Sanjh]

That's great, I'll be looking for some great stories from you. I always think about writing a novel, but I'm not good with narration skills.

[Chaise Nicole]

Very nicely written! While reading it I could imagine it being sang along to a soft piano melody, but that's just me :) Reminds me of My Immortal by Evanescence in tone.

[Sanjh]

Thank you so much, it is actually a song and music too is almost ready...:)

[rashu]

beautiful..just beautiful..that's all i can say ..ur pain was clearly expressed through ur words ..it had a deep meaning..
amazing poem i must say
keep it up

[Sanjh]

Thank you so much Rashu...:)

[Sindu]

Amazing how you poured pain into those words. At times they were angry and at others, sad.
Great one Sanjay!

[Sanjh]

Thank you so much Sindu...:)

[Nitesh Mahabal]

Remembered a path of my life reading this. Great work

[Sanjh]

I'm glad you liked it Nitesh...thank you...:)

[Tara Togoland]

.....the pain in my heart was not in my destiny......after those first two lines, I knew this was simply going to be a master piece......I was right.

[Sanjh]

Thank youso much Tara...:)