In love with you...

In love with you...

A Poem by Sanjh
"

For someone just fallen in love...

"

You make me smile,

You make me cry.

You make me care,

And I wonder why?

 

You make me sing,

You make me whole.

Just getting you is,

My life's only goal.

 

You know it's love,

You know it's true.

And I'm sure,

I'm in love with you.

Your love is a knife,

And it's cutting through,

But all I know is,

I'm in love with you.

In love with you...

 

When you're with me,

I have nothing to fear.

It rains from my eyes,

When you're not near.

 

Baby, you can trust me,

I'll never cheat.

Coz you're the drug,

That makes my heart beat.

 

You know this happens,

When the love is true.

My heart beat tells me,

I'm in love with you.

How to win your heart?

I don't have a clue,

But all I know is,

I'm in love with you.

Yeah I just know is,

Am in love with you.

In love with you...

© 2014 Sanjh


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This makes a great set of lyrics! I'd love to hear is set to music, maybe something with acoustic guitar.

NOTES:
"Getting" you sounds possessive or vindictive to me. Just a couple of suggestions: "Just getting you is," Maybe "Just holding you is" or "Just gaining your love is"


Posted 6 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Sanjh

6 Years Ago

Yeah these are the lyrics, I can sing it, but I am not good with guitar, just a beginner. But will s.. read more
MomzillaNC

6 Years Ago

You're welcome. I'm glad to be of help.

Please let me know when you have the music up.
Sanjh

6 Years Ago

yeah sure, I'd be more then happy to inform...:)



Reviews

Beautiful and positive words for love.
"Yeah I just know is,
Am in love with you.
In love with you..."
I like the flow of thoughts and the joy of love in the words. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 5 Years Ago


Love is in the air! PTL! I have read several poems today about LOVE,
and they keep getting better and better, terrific write! Thanks for sharing
and b-blessed!

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sanjh

5 Years Ago

Thank you so much James. :)
i like this song! It is well beautifully written! :D

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sanjh

5 Years Ago

Thank you Lyndy. :)
A very lyrical poem. Reads like a song. The poet wants to declare undying love and he does it in a very ardent fashion.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sanjh

6 Years Ago

Thanks Divya...:)
hahaha AWW, this is so cute...sweet! :D

Coz you're the drug,

That makes my heart beat.
^My favorite lines

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sanjh

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much Suk...:)
The Black Warrior

6 Years Ago

You are very welcome!
Aye, poppy. Cool. xxxxxxx

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sanjh

6 Years Ago

Thank you Jessica...:)
Yes, very lyrical piece. Also, meaningful and emotive at the same time. There is not a single thing you have left undescrined about the uncertainity about his own feelings, one goes through in love. Very interesting write.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sanjh

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much Penny, I'm glad you liked it...:)
Penny

6 Years Ago

My pleasure.
Yeah I just know I (not is),
Am in love with you.
In love with you...
Someone's getting TOOOOOO romantic these days yeah! ;)
What I love about your poems is you give a a pure love's image that never turns vulgar!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Khyati

6 Years Ago

-_- And still you won't let THAT happen... ;P
Sanjh

6 Years Ago

Let what happen...?
Khyati

6 Years Ago

Oh! So you want me to say it publicly? OKAY! ;) HERE I GO.. I'm gonna say it then!
So it makes me feel alright that I have felt this way, whatever it means, wherever I am drifting or going in life, there is a destination and I don't know where, but at least someone to have felt this way, yea that is a good feeling, maybe the best, if only now I have to apply it to some common goal and respect others, these unknown others, I think this poem will make tomorrow possible that I can greet others without feeling a burden or unpleasant presence on them which I make of a situation if I feel threatened which one should not when you don't know the other ones anyway, one must just wait and see and try to figure out what one is supposed to be doing, how they supposed to act, etc, whenever possible, I have to buy mini marshmallows and drop off my child at school, doesn't seem so difficult, when the other people doing work for him, so and it isn't, so he is working, I should help someone, what a nice thing to be able to figure out languages

Posted 6 Years Ago


This poem was very cute.

Kaze~

Posted 6 Years Ago



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