In love with you...

For someone just fallen in love...

You make me smile,

You make me cry.

You make me care,

And I wonder why?

 

You make me sing,

You make me whole.

Just getting you is,

My life's only goal.

 

You know it's love,

You know it's true.

And I'm sure,

I'm in love with you.

Your love is a knife,

And it's cutting through,

But all I know is,

I'm in love with you.

In love with you...

 

When you're with me,

I have nothing to fear.

It rains from my eyes,

When you're not near.

 

Baby, you can trust me,

I'll never cheat.

Coz you're the drug,

That makes my heart beat.

 

You know this happens,

When the love is true.

My heart beat tells me,

I'm in love with you.

How to win your heart?

I don't have a clue,

But all I know is,

I'm in love with you.

Yeah I just know is,

Am in love with you.

In love with you...

Author's Note

Kindly give your views.

Reviews

[MomzillaNC]

This makes a great set of lyrics! I'd love to hear is set to music, maybe something with acoustic guitar.

NOTES:
"Getting" you sounds possessive or vindictive to me. Just a couple of suggestions: "Just getting you is," Maybe "Just holding you is" or "Just gaining your love is"

[Sanjh]

Yeah these are the lyrics, I can sing it, but I am not good with guitar, just a beginner. But will sing it with complete music someday, for sure...:)

And you are a keen observer, you got it correct great suggestions, I'll keep them in mind for my upcoming writings. Here I've used "getting" for the purpose of showing possessiveness only...

Thank you again, every review from you is always helpful...:)

[MomzillaNC]

You're welcome. I'm glad to be of help.

Please let me know when you have the music up.

[Sanjh]

yeah sure, I'd be more then happy to inform...:)

[Coyote Poetry]

Beautiful and positive words for love.
"Yeah I just know is,
Am in love with you.
In love with you..."
I like the flow of thoughts and the joy of love in the words. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Jamestown]

Love is in the air! PTL! I have read several poems today about LOVE,
and they keep getting better and better, terrific write! Thanks for sharing
and b-blessed!

[Sanjh]

Thank you so much James. :)

[Lyndy]

i like this song! It is well beautifully written! :D

[Sanjh]

Thank you Lyndy. :)

[DIVYA]

A very lyrical poem. Reads like a song. The poet wants to declare undying love and he does it in a very ardent fashion.

[Sanjh]

Thanks Divya...:)

[The Black Warrior]

hahaha AWW, this is so cute...sweet! :D

Coz you're the drug,

That makes my heart beat.
^My favorite lines

[Sanjh]

Thank you so much Suk...:)

[The Black Warrior]

You are very welcome!

[Luna Zerimar]

Aye, poppy. Cool. xxxxxxx

[Sanjh]

Thank you Jessica...:)

[Penny]

Yes, very lyrical piece. Also, meaningful and emotive at the same time. There is not a single thing you have left undescrined about the uncertainity about his own feelings, one goes through in love. Very interesting write.

[Sanjh]

Thank you so much Penny, I'm glad you liked it...:)

[Penny]

My pleasure.

[Khyati]

Yeah I just know I (not is),
Am in love with you.
In love with you...
Someone's getting TOOOOOO romantic these days yeah! ;)
What I love about your poems is you give a a pure love's image that never turns vulgar!

[Sanjh]

These days? Lol, my mind works in just one direction, mostly...:p
thank you Khyati...:)

[Khyati]

-_- And still you won't let THAT happen... ;P

[Sanjh]

Let what happen...?

[Khyati]

Oh! So you want me to say it publicly? OKAY! ;) HERE I GO.. I'm gonna say it then!

[Laura Lynn]

So it makes me feel alright that I have felt this way, whatever it means, wherever I am drifting or going in life, there is a destination and I don't know where, but at least someone to have felt this way, yea that is a good feeling, maybe the best, if only now I have to apply it to some common goal and respect others, these unknown others, I think this poem will make tomorrow possible that I can greet others without feeling a burden or unpleasant presence on them which I make of a situation if I feel threatened which one should not when you don't know the other ones anyway, one must just wait and see and try to figure out what one is supposed to be doing, how they supposed to act, etc, whenever possible, I have to buy mini marshmallows and drop off my child at school, doesn't seem so difficult, when the other people doing work for him, so and it isn't, so he is working, I should help someone, what a nice thing to be able to figure out languages

[♔ CrownedDevil &#..]

This poem was very cute.

Kaze~