In love with you...

For someone just fallen in love...

You make me smile,

You make me cry.

You make me care,

And I wonder why?

 

You make me sing,

You make me whole.

Just getting you is,

My life's only goal.

 

You know it's love,

You know it's true.

And I'm sure,

I'm in love with you.

Your love is a knife,

And it's cutting through,

But all I know is,

I'm in love with you.

In love with you...

 

When you're with me,

I have nothing to fear.

It rains from my eyes,

When you're not near.

 

Baby, you can trust me,

I'll never cheat.

Coz you're the drug,

That makes my heart beat.

 

You know this happens,

When the love is true.

My heart beat tells me,

I'm in love with you.

How to win your heart?

I don't have a clue,

But all I know is,

I'm in love with you.

Yeah I just know is,

Am in love with you.

In love with you...

Author's Note

Kindly give your views.

Reviews

[MomzillaNC]

This makes a great set of lyrics! I'd love to hear is set to music, maybe something with acoustic guitar.

NOTES:
"Getting" you sounds possessive or vindictive to me. Just a couple of suggestions: "Just getting you is," Maybe "Just holding you is" or "Just gaining your love is"

[Sanjh]

Yeah these are the lyrics, I can sing it, but I am not good with guitar, just a beginner. But will sing it with complete music someday, for sure...:)

And you are a keen observer, you got it correct great suggestions, I'll keep them in mind for my upcoming writings. Here I've used "getting" for the purpose of showing possessiveness only...

Thank you again, every review from you is always helpful...:)

[MomzillaNC]

You're welcome. I'm glad to be of help.

Please let me know when you have the music up.

[Sanjh]

yeah sure, I'd be more then happy to inform...:)

[Misha]

Really good but please make it a song, i bet many would like to hear it

[Sanjh]

It is a song Misha, thanks...:)

[Misha]

i mean with music like a real song and my words may be failing the purpose but i think you know what i mean

[Sanjh]

Yep Misha, it is a song with music and everything...:)

[Misha]

Oops i am sorry then and will like to listen to it someday

[Sanjh]

Sorry? Why? And I'm working on it, actually it's not recorded yet but maybe someday...:)

[Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere]

Yes, it reads as a song, I wouldn't go so far to call it a poem. But it is certainly good enough to make a beautiful love song.

[Sanjh]

Thank you Rudi...:)

[Arshia]

This is so simple yet so intense! I loved the rhyming..lovely poem Sanjh! :)

[Sanjh]

Thank you so much Arshia...:)

[Nikki]

"Baby, you can trust me,
I'll never cheat.
Coz you're the drug,
That makes my heart beat." I love this, you nailed it!

[Sanjh]

I'm glad you liked it so much. Thank you...:)

[Confuser]

I look below and see "great set of lyrics" and I was thinking as I read, there was a great chorus there. It was wonderful. I really enjoyed it. Thank you again.

[Sanjh]

Yes, I wrote it as a song only. I'm glad you liked the chorus part. Thank you so much for appreciating...:)

[Confuser]

Love music too. T/Y

[ayesha gupta]

nice and romantic. i liked reading it.

[Sanjh]

Thank you for reading...:)

[Angel Alli]

I really enjoy the repetition in this poem, and how it gives it a song-like quality

[Sanjh]

I am glad you liked it.
Thanks you for reading...:)

[Pushkar Prabhat]

beautiful romantic poem!!
very well written!!!
i liked it!
:)
LISTEN TO MOM(momzilla)!

[Sanjh]

Thank you for appreciating...:)

and I am working on it, I always listen to her...:):p

[Pushkar Prabhat]

you are welcome.......:) :)

[R Smith]

the singer sings on, more outstanding lyrics Sanjh, one day we will hear you on tv i'm sure :)

[Sanjh]

hahahaha...Thank you so much sir...Maybe someday...:)

[Shitsune Hyuuga]

This poems emotions seems to be same as one of my unposted one :) and it some what reflects my current feelings right now. Being in love really has it perks when writing. Your work is great, I do love them all.

[Sanjh]

Thank you for appreciating ...:)
And, Oh God I know that feeling, it inspires you to do things you have never dreamt of, I'll be looking forward for your poem...:)