In love with you...

For someone just fallen in love...

You make me smile,

You make me cry.

You make me care,

And I wonder why?

 

You make me sing,

You make me whole.

Just getting you is,

My life's only goal.

 

You know it's love,

You know it's true.

And I'm sure,

I'm in love with you.

Your love is a knife,

And it's cutting through,

But all I know is,

I'm in love with you.

In love with you...

 

When you're with me,

I have nothing to fear.

It rains from my eyes,

When you're not near.

 

Baby, you can trust me,

I'll never cheat.

Coz you're the drug,

That makes my heart beat.

 

You know this happens,

When the love is true.

My heart beat tells me,

I'm in love with you.

How to win your heart?

I don't have a clue,

But all I know is,

I'm in love with you.

Yeah I just know is,

Am in love with you.

In love with you...

Author's Note

Kindly give your views.

Reviews

[MomzillaNC]

This makes a great set of lyrics! I'd love to hear is set to music, maybe something with acoustic guitar.

NOTES:
"Getting" you sounds possessive or vindictive to me. Just a couple of suggestions: "Just getting you is," Maybe "Just holding you is" or "Just gaining your love is"

[Sanjh]

Yeah these are the lyrics, I can sing it, but I am not good with guitar, just a beginner. But will sing it with complete music someday, for sure...:)

And you are a keen observer, you got it correct great suggestions, I'll keep them in mind for my upcoming writings. Here I've used "getting" for the purpose of showing possessiveness only...

Thank you again, every review from you is always helpful...:)

[MomzillaNC]

You're welcome. I'm glad to be of help.

Please let me know when you have the music up.

[Sanjh]

yeah sure, I'd be more then happy to inform...:)

[Shadows Ember]

I enjoy this very much, it has an eye catching title, which is always the best. Though, everything has ways it can get better. My suggestions being, the way every line is capitalized is a bit distracting to the reader. I would suggest capitalizing only where a new sentence begins. Another would be a few spelling errors, but otherwise a lovely write(:

[Sanjh]

Thank you so much for reviewing and the advice. I'll keep these things in mind and improve my writing...

Thanks again, it's very helpful...:)

[Shadows Ember]

its no problem at all

[Gurleen Saluja]

It's simple and an easy approach poem with good choice of words.
Thanks for sharing :)

[Sanjh]

Thanks for reading and reviewing...:)

[Prakruti]

Pretty simple though touchy it is. Rightly written, the one who makes you cry is the one who makes you smile when you are in love :)
Loved the lyrics.

[Sanjh]

yeah true...Our smile and tears both depend on someone or the other...

thanks for reading...:)

[M.A.Rathore]

A wonderful piece on love. When a person is in love he feels the presence of her beloved everywhere he looks upon. The repitation of some sentences make your piece musical . The diction is simple and expressive.
Keep writing ...
Have a lovely day!

[Sanjh]

I am glad you liked it, thanks...:)

[M.A.Rathore]

Welcome always...

[blackfairy3]

Oh wow this was pretty amazing I really like to read about love so this is by far my favorite :)

[Sanjh]

I am glad you liked it, thanks for appreciating...:)