Love's in the air...

Love's in the air...

A Poem by Sanjh
"

You just need to feel it.

"

Something's different today,
something's unusual.
Sunrise beautiful than ever,
and my sight delusional...

 

There is some magic in the wind...
like a witch's lethal spell.
I have this weird feeling,
and what's this spooky smell?

 

Jules fell for Shawn,
and Sammy proposed Sarah.
They used to hate each other,
and what's wrong with Terra?

 

No one's fighting anymore,
everyone's so polite.
Am I going crazy or something?
Why is everything so right?

 

Is it, what I am thinking?
so peaceful, anywhere I stare.
Oh!!! I know what this spell is,
It's LOVE in the air...

 

But now I realise,
maybe I'm in a dream.
Everything's so perfect,
or atleast it seems.

 

I don't want to wake up,
I don't know what to do.
But I believe in my heart,
someday my dream will come true...

© 2014 Sanjh


Author's Note

Sanjh
Trying something funny for the first time mixed with a message. Help me with your reviews...

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this was splendid!!!......

"Something's different today,
something's unusual.
Sunrise beautiful than ever,
and my sight delusional..."

"But now I realise,
maybe I'm in a dream.
Everything's so perfect,
or atleast it seems."

beautifully done......!!!
i liked it!!!
:)

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sanjh

6 Years Ago

Thank you brother...:)
Pushkar Prabhat

6 Years Ago

you are welcome........:) :)



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Aww, I love this poem. It's very beautiful! Well done. :)

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sanjh

5 Years Ago

Thanks Lyndy. :)
Its the feel good Valentine poem of the year. Nice flow and beautiful comparisons though transition from first and second is sort of abrupt. Rest, it is an intellegent and emotional piece. Thumbs up!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sanjh

5 Years Ago

Thank you so much Penny. :)
Penny

5 Years Ago

Pleasure..
ya it was unny and thanks for making me stress free even for sometime before my exams:)
now coming to your poetry
it was nice ..
you wrote it really well
also the words you used enhanced its beauty.
keep writing:)

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sanjh

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much Rashu...:)
Wow..... Simply amazing.

Kaze~

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sanjh

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much Kaze...:)
Lildeadcupcake

6 Years Ago

Your very welcome. :-)
Sounds like paradise to me !

:)

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sanjh

6 Years Ago

Thank you for reading Layi...:)
Layi Tate

6 Years Ago

Thank you for sharing ..

It's okay. Seemed more romantic than comical.

Nothing seemed comical. If you were trying to be funny, you should..maybe make it more cartoonish?

I dunno. x

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sanjh

6 Years Ago

You are right Jessica. Actually I am not good with funny writes...:(
But I'll try to improve f.. read more
I really liked this! I think it's a good mix of humor but also sends a message and I think many, many people can probably relate.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sanjh

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much for appreciating Brooklyn...:)
I remember feeling like this when all my friends around me were falling in love. A fine poem.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sanjh

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much, I'm glad you liked it...:)
very nice and lovely. heart-warming

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sanjh

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much Ragini..:)

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