Moonlight...

Moonlight...

A Poem by Sanjh
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A feeling long suppressed...

"
Sitting at the window,
I saw the full moon tonight.
It felt beautiful than ever,
Showering bright white light...

There was some sadness in it,
It felt like the moon is crying.
I think the moon was talking to me,
But why was he shying...?

The moonlight touched my face,
Reminding me of someone very special.
A tear rolled out of my eyes,
And head went to nestle...

All the emotions suppressed,
Came out through my eyes.
Just looking at the moon,
My tears went on rise...

Maybe she too was looking at the moon,
Maybe she was also crying.
My heart was pounding so fast,
I felt like I'm dying...

All the times when we were together,
Kept on flashing in my mind.
My heart filled with her love,
And now it was not confined...

The moonlight told me,
How much she misses me.
There are tears in her eyes,
And she is making this plea...

"Please come back to me,
Let's try to work things out..."
My mind was confused,
But the heart wanted to shout...

I could see her face on the moon,
She was in front of my sight.
The moon was just a messenger,
And message, was the moonlight...

© 2014 Sanjh


Author's Note

Sanjh
Got the idea for this poem while returning late at night from work. Hope you'd enjoy...thank you...:)

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Well written and delivered!
I have felt this feeling before as if my special someone and I were longing
for one another under the same moon at the same time:(
I really enjoyed this piece and pray that you and yours work things out!
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sanjh

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much James. :)



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Though heart-touching the story is an expression of deep love felt being aside . This poem reminds me of the pubjabi song..
Aa jo sili sili aaundi hai hawa.....
Ni authe koi ronda hovega....
Yaadan teriya o ankhan vich la
Ni authe koi ronda hovega....

Is expressed thus in your poem....


Maybe she too was looking at the moon,
Maybe she was also crying.
My heart was pounding so fast,
I felt like I'm dying...

Fantastic feelings with superb diction.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sanjh

6 Years Ago

Thank you Sir...:)
M.A.Rathore

6 Years Ago

Welcome always
"I could see her face on the moon,
She was in front of my sight.
The moon was just a messenger,
And message, was the moonlight..."

wow................truly beautiful......
nice setting and good story telling!!!
i liked it!!!
:)

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sanjh

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much Bro...:)
Pushkar Prabhat

6 Years Ago

you are welcome!!!
:) :)
A tragicly beautiful melody! Pours your emotions into the reader. That's sweet and sad Sanjh

I could see her face on the moon,
She was in front of my sight.
The moon was just a messenger,
And message, was the moonlight...

Heart-touching lines! Amazing! Bravo!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sanjh

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much Sindu...:)
Sindu

6 Years Ago

Welcome sanjh! Hope you reconcile..

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Sanjh

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