I wish you were mine...

I wish you were mine...

A Poem by Sanjh
"

Trying another song...

"
Anywhere...
Everywhere...
I just see your face,
I feel you in this air...

I'm here...
And I'm in fear...
It hurts so much inside,
And I'm all tears...

I wish you were mine,
With all my heart I've been trying,
I wish we could fly away,
But you always kept on lying...
I wish you were mine,
Now look, I'm crying,
I gave you my everything,
Now all what left is dying...


It's been so long...
I've been praying along...
Just waiting for you,
But I was so damn wrong...

I tried to be strong...
Wrote too many songs...
Thinking it might change your heart,
But I was so damn wrong...

I wish you were mine,
With all my heart I've been trying,
I wish we could fly away,
But you always kept on lying...
I wish you were mine,
Now look, I'm crying,
I gave you my everything,
Now all what left is dying...


Now look at me...
I'm on my knees...
I'm crying your name,
Please hear my plea...

Sorrows, deeper than sea...
and you are the key...
Now kiss my lips,
And set me free...

I wish you were mine,
With all my heart I've been trying,
I wish we could fly away,
But you always kept on lying...
I wish you were mine,
Now look, I'm crying,
I gave you my everything,
Now all that's left is dying...

© 2014 Sanjh


Author's Note

Sanjh
It's incomplete, not exactly how I framed it, so I'll be making many more changes in it. Your views will be very valuable...Thank you...:)

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This piece is indeed a very sad one. I liked how you were able to get through the strong emotions he feels on being heartbroken. The feeling of emptiness one feels when the one person he/she loves lies to him/her is something probably incomparable to any sorrow. The plea of the poet is beautifully pictured... something that is quite difficult when using repetition. This piece of yours effectively communicates the anguish and pain of the writer. I really loved it. :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sanjh

6 Years Ago

Thank you Shivangi, I'm glad you liked it...:)



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Give it a nice ending and it looks fine...

Posted 10 Months Ago


Nice*

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sanjh

5 Years Ago

Thanks again...:)
A very nie nd a deeppoem in d form of a song

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sanjh

5 Years Ago

Thank you so much Adiyah...:)
You captured the romance in a mood that revealed feelings and wishes. Well done.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sanjh

5 Years Ago

Thanks brother :)
Onyia-ota, Kingsley Chukwuebuka

5 Years Ago

You're welcome.
Great writing especially for a song

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sanjh

5 Years Ago

Thank you so much linda :)
Wow, this is deep. Is an expression of true love and feelings for someone special. It sounds like a song!

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sanjh

5 Years Ago

Yes, it's a song, thank you so much for reading.:)
Great description of love, good job

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sanjh

5 Years Ago

Thank you Sir :)
But you always kept on lying...
I wish you were mine,
Now look, I'm crying

This hits very deep

Really good poem.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sanjh

5 Years Ago

Thank you so much :)
I like this song, it's a beautiful one! :D

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sanjh

5 Years Ago

Thanks Lyndy, glad you liked it :)
This is a great poam. Keep up the good work.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sanjh

5 Years Ago

Thanks Hailey :)

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Tags: lyrics, song, sad, romantic, love, betrayal

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Sanjh

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