...Awakening: Dreams!

...Awakening: Dreams!

A Poem by Sanjeeta Sharma Pokharel "Hridayaninadini"






















Yeah, 
Nights shall creep in, 
my folk!
And it always does...
Whilst,
They shall dream again-
Of lights
Let you be-
Awake
to amass the aura of 
those mid-night lamps...

© 2012 Sanjeeta Sharma Pokharel "Hridayaninadini"


Author's Note

 Sanjeeta Sharma Pokharel "Hridayaninadini"
Another trial- A sketched-thought

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Sid
Nice, somehow it induces an image of the star spangled sky which for some reason is visible only in my dreams, I'm not sure what you meant by mid-night lamps but it really makes my mind wander into fantasy (ah the bliss). The sketch gives more depth to the poem somehow (I wish I could sketch like that, I suck btw specially when it comes to colors)...great write! Oh and for some reason I wrote a poem called awakening some time back as well (it's completely different though), I sent you an RR, check it out!

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 Sanjeeta Sharma Pokharel "Hridayaninadini"

8 Years Ago

Thanks Sid,
Mid-night lamps here reflects the hard-work...There are thousand of souls who keep.. read more
Sid

8 Years Ago

Ok, that makes it a lot deeper, so let me say this again, great write! Yup it definitely is, thanks .. read more



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A pleasing play on the ideas of light and dark, of night and its waking moments... capturing the pulse of the night hours!

Posted 8 Years Ago


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 Sanjeeta Sharma Pokharel "Hridayaninadini"

8 Years Ago

Thanks Jibey :)
I like this poem very much! We can dream about light or we can absorb the midnight energy of the heavenly night lights. beautiful poem, in words and sketch

Posted 8 Years Ago


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 Sanjeeta Sharma Pokharel "Hridayaninadini"

8 Years Ago

Gracias :)
I like this a lot, a quality poem full of superb imagery...fine write

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 Sanjeeta Sharma Pokharel "Hridayaninadini"

8 Years Ago

Thanks :) Leslie, was waiting for your comments :)
a stunning write, like a masterpiece of old.

Posted 8 Years Ago


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 Sanjeeta Sharma Pokharel "Hridayaninadini"

8 Years Ago

:) Thanks Neva :)
A great read that gets the old grey cells firing...
well done :)

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 Sanjeeta Sharma Pokharel "Hridayaninadini"

8 Years Ago

:) Thank You :)
fine

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 Sanjeeta Sharma Pokharel "Hridayaninadini"

8 Years Ago

:) Thanks
I like the artwork and the use of the poem. Artwork and poetry can work well together. Thank you for the excellent poem and artwork.
Coyote

Posted 8 Years Ago


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 Sanjeeta Sharma Pokharel "Hridayaninadini"

8 Years Ago

Thanks Coyote :)
A kind and timely guide to issues. So, you're getting to be the dream weaver now?

Posted 8 Years Ago


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 Sanjeeta Sharma Pokharel "Hridayaninadini"

8 Years Ago

:) I would love to be a dream-weaver, make all people happy- and awakened!
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Sid
Nice, somehow it induces an image of the star spangled sky which for some reason is visible only in my dreams, I'm not sure what you meant by mid-night lamps but it really makes my mind wander into fantasy (ah the bliss). The sketch gives more depth to the poem somehow (I wish I could sketch like that, I suck btw specially when it comes to colors)...great write! Oh and for some reason I wrote a poem called awakening some time back as well (it's completely different though), I sent you an RR, check it out!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This comment has been deleted by the poster.
 Sanjeeta Sharma Pokharel "Hridayaninadini"

8 Years Ago

Thanks Sid,
Mid-night lamps here reflects the hard-work...There are thousand of souls who keep.. read more
Sid

8 Years Ago

Ok, that makes it a lot deeper, so let me say this again, great write! Yup it definitely is, thanks .. read more

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"When words are stiff and hard to evoke out; they shape themselves as a poem [that last forever] " -Sanjeeta Sharma Pokharel "Hridayaninadini" http://sanjeetapokharel.blogspot.in/ When I see the.. more..

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