Dodging Pain

Just a little poem about when you have to 'keep on keeping on.' nothing serious, just for fun:)

Look down.

keep walking.

don't fall.

10

9

8

blink back the tears.

don't cry.

don't let them win.

7

6

5

don't think.

you'll think about them.

keep counting.

4

3

2

check pulse.

keep breathing.

don't-

1

-break..

too late

Author's Note

please ignore my bad grammar, this poem was just for fun. Also i changed the format do you like it?

Reviews

[typicallyunsure]

I really like the structure with the numbers/counting mixed in with the poem. The idea of keeping composure in order to hide your weakness from others is very interesting. The poem brought us right into the characters head as they endure this sensation. I like it

[EricGodsil]

A decent poem that I think everyone could relate to in some way. Like Katie said, not sure of the story; however, i can relate to it. I enjoyed the structure as well. Entertaining and a little tugging.

[Katie Lynn]

I'm not entirely sure what the story behind this poem must be, but personally I think it sounds good anyway. You have potential. :)