War Medal

a haiku. how i would describe a war medal.

A golden glory

  each has its own story

  hardship, honor, Time

Author's Note

I decided to try rhyming in a haiku. do you think it worked without making seem too childish?

Reviews

[Hamkar]

Technically haiku don't rhyme but go with the flow really. I like the picture you have matched it with. I reckon it could have a little more depth behind it although I like the idea of Time with a capital. I think it is the second line that is lagging a little maybe. Anyway interesting topic. Hope you don't mind too much criticism on a small haiku.

[Nishant Gupta]

good lines see mine too "QUEST OF LIFE".