A Poem by Elizabeth

Girl waits for her love one. Everyday, until the day he arrives, she'll be there waiting. Will he show up?



By: E.D


Maybe someday you might come.

Maybe someday you might stay.

If so you do, will you let me know?


I’ve been missing you a lot lately.

I’m even betting.


Some days I just sit alone.

Read a book or talk alone.

The thunder of the rain startles me,

And something fears inside me.


I watch some days out the window.

The water hitting the window roughly.

I embrace myself in my own heat reassuringly.


I always thought…

If the person you love ever shows up.

And if the person that loves you, runs towards the end to reach you.

Is there someone?


I want to scream and run.

Be free and let my feeling run through me.

A wave a shock.

Something unreal.

Something that does not exist.

I want to feel it.


I clamp my teeth and shut my eyes.

I bow towards the window and place my head on the window with ice.

The coldness pressures my heated skull to cry.


Will you ever show up?

I have my second guesses.

But none of them tell me to love less.

Maybe one day you’ll show up.

I’ll be at the window to wait your arrive.

I won’t leave, until you arrive…




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© 2010 Elizabeth

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it's pretty good just i think some of the lines are kind of ordinary and not as creative as they could be. i really liked the way it ended though and i like the visual parts of it. good job =]

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Added on June 23, 2010
Last Updated on June 24, 2010
Tags: Love, Someday, Poem, E.D., Window, Romance, I'll Wait



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Hello! My name is Elizabeth. I love the color sapphire, does it relate to my username? :) I'm very friendly and random, maybe sometimes crazy :P Music is my life and I couldn't live without it :).. more..

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