under the footrest

under the footrest

A Poem by Sunflower/Sara Kendrick
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Senryu

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under the footrest

he crawled hiding and plays...

sleep slips up on him

© 2013 Sunflower/Sara Kendrick


Author's Note

Sunflower/Sara Kendrick
Great grandson..

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I love this! It's so sweet. Very visual poem. A delightful read.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sunflower/Sara Kendrick

5 Years Ago

MO,

Thanks for the kind review of my work..

Sara
Miss Owl

5 Years Ago

You are most welcome.
Sunflower/Sara Kendrick

5 Years Ago

Okay..Sara
i can visualize so much from this short piece..thank you for sharing

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is sweet. I can visualize this happening as I read. This is a fantastic senryu.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Saw your note and made me smile to make this perfect, restful connection. How sweet sleep comes upon children... it too often escapes us as we grow weary in the world.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Reminds me of childhood...
Funny how a few lines can bring back so many thoughts to the memory.


Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

What a heartwarming senyru this is! I could picture a child curling up in a ball to sleep in the midst of playing. Well written. lydI**

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on October 16, 2013
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Sunflower/Sara Kendrick
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Thomaston, GA



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