Heart Of The Sea

Heart Of The Sea

A Poem by Sunflower/Sara Kendrick
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Sonnet

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Dark night cool waters beckon love come forth

As its lapping echoes from shore to shore

Drawing waves kiss the sand and beg for more

Come, come love, listen intently thenceforth

 

Black waters viewed 'pon a cloudly blue night

Seagulls, pelicans have flown away home

Ocean's waves offer up varied honeycomb

Lovers have kissed again and taken flight

 

The heart of the sea's depths offers repose

Enticing addulation 'pon the waves

Short visits somehow many hearts enslave

Come again as waves stir evening primrose

 

The heart of the sea beckons juxtapose

Melancoly spirit thoughts now oppose

© 2013 Sunflower/Sara Kendrick


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Excellent.
Dark is the heart of the cosmos that beckon us. Racing waves of solar energy. The ocean ripples with moon's reflections. I wish to drown in the yellow orange hydrogen furnace. I wish to drown in the shine brine the reflect the same shade as my hazel eyes. I wish to drown in love, in awe of all the wonder this reality has to offer. Let it swallow my poetic soul, leaving only a lite littering of poetry in my wake, and I will die a contented fool.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sunflower/Sara Kendrick

3 Years Ago

Joshua, Thanks for the poetic review of my work..I appreciate you stopping by and taking time to rea.. read more
Joshua Amos Graff

3 Years Ago

My pleasure.
Sunflower/Sara Kendrick

3 Years Ago

Okay..Sara



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Your lovely poem underlines our traditional fascination with the Sea and its surroundings.
I love the way you chose to rhyme certain words as well.
Thanks for bringing us closer to the beach. (we don't have one here in Dallas, ha_

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A lovely sonnet.
The wording is formal and gives me a Victorian sort of elegance in my imaginations.


Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sunflower/Sara Kendrick

6 Years Ago

David,

Thanks for reading and taking time to comment.I appreciate the time spent there... read more
I enjoyed the rhyme scheme in this poem. I read it out loud for the full effect. There is something magical about the sea and the shoreline. A melancholy heart soon finds joy in this surrounding. Lovely write here. Lydi**

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sunflower/Sara Kendrick

6 Years Ago

Lydia,

Thanks for the helpful review..Your thoughts were uplifting..

Sara
I love the ocean...
"Drawing waves kiss the sand and beg for more
Come, come love, listen intently thenceforth"
Fantastic lines, fantastic poem.
Loved it :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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