old man

old man

A Poem by Sunflower/Sara Kendrick
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Senryu

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old man on gator

picks up scattered trash with tool..

bright yellow shirt

© 2015 Sunflower/Sara Kendrick


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Sunflower/Sara Kendrick
Just a man working..

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A very impressive Senryu. I need to learn how to write those. The image your works provoke is a strong. one. Very well done. Yes, I must learn how to write those!!!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is very strong and impressive. I can see what your words describe. A very visual image. Excellent creative writing.

Posted 8 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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Added on August 7, 2015
Last Updated on August 7, 2015
Tags: Short, Senryu

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Sunflower/Sara Kendrick
Sunflower/Sara Kendrick

Thomaston, GA



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