When The Peacock Came

When The Peacock Came

A Poem by Sunflower/Sara Kendrick
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Ae Freislighe (aye, freshly) poetry form.

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Peacock landed meowing Upon our porch one midnight My brain jumped fast allowing Thoughts fly by candlelight What is this cat curious Out there that has demanded Or am I delirious Dreaming a peacock landed meowing

© 2023 Sunflower/Sara Kendrick


Author's Note

Sunflower/Sara Kendrick
A peacock showed up at our home and is not a natural species here.

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Your poem is imaginative and quirky. The way you describe the peacock and the cat is both amusing and vivid. Your use of rhyme and imagery is particularly effective, and it helps to create a sense of whimsy and humor in the reader. I think that your poem is a testament to the power of art to help us process our emotions and connect with others.

Posted 8 Months Ago



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Added on May 17, 2023
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Sunflower/Sara Kendrick
Sunflower/Sara Kendrick

Thomaston, GA



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