Under The Rose Trellis

Under The Rose Trellis

A Poem by Sunflower/Sara Kendrick
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Choka, the longest of Japanese Haiku type poem...

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                             Running Pale Pink Rose

                       On the trellis grows_soft scent

                             Wafts on morning air

                   

                               Under rose trellis

                       You steal a kiss__Oh! Blissful

                            Lips that taste of rose

 

© 2011 Sunflower/Sara Kendrick


Author's Note

Sunflower/Sara Kendrick
Choka, written in response to competition that said leave me breathless..

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There is something special about a rose, a kiss, and a poem...
They are all rather "minuscule" in the grand scheme of things. Yet, they all have the power to change this world into a better place...
Much like you Sara as an author... Making the world a better place.
Lovely!

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Pax
simplicity is beauty. lovely poem.

Posted 8 Years Ago


This is gorgeous! All hits the point in soft mannerism, wow! xoxo

Posted 9 Years Ago


Beautifully told and presented , visual writing.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Good, well- written poem that arouses my interest in this kind of poem.Good work

Posted 9 Years Ago


Sunflower/Sara Kendrick

8 Years Ago

Thanks for your kind review...Sara
This is a breathtaking piece of poetry to inhale and savor forever. It's just a magnificent and beautiful poem one could cherish forever!

WindSong

Posted 9 Years Ago


I well crafted poem that sends its subtle message light an exhale in the wind. A very good poem. Nice work.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Smelt the fragrance of the rose.. Really spontaneous. Good luck

Posted 9 Years Ago


Amazing Haiku!
Real nice descriptions.

Posted 9 Years Ago


This piece is truly Breathless.... :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


What a wonderfully romantic piece.

Posted 9 Years Ago



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Added on May 12, 2010
Last Updated on April 19, 2011
Tags: Choka, love, nature, take your breath away
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