Under The Rose Trellis

Under The Rose Trellis

A Poem by Sunflower/Sara Kendrick

Choka, the longest of Japanese Haiku type poem...


                             Running Pale Pink Rose

                       On the trellis grows_soft scent

                             Wafts on morning air


                               Under rose trellis

                       You steal a kiss__Oh! Blissful

                            Lips that taste of rose


© 2011 Sunflower/Sara Kendrick

Author's Note

Sunflower/Sara Kendrick
Choka, written in response to competition that said leave me breathless..

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There is something special about a rose, a kiss, and a poem...
They are all rather "minuscule" in the grand scheme of things. Yet, they all have the power to change this world into a better place...
Much like you Sara as an author... Making the world a better place.

Posted 7 Years Ago

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simplicity is beauty. lovely poem.

Posted 8 Years Ago

This is gorgeous! All hits the point in soft mannerism, wow! xoxo

Posted 9 Years Ago

Beautifully told and presented , visual writing.

Posted 9 Years Ago

Good, well- written poem that arouses my interest in this kind of poem.Good work

Posted 9 Years Ago

Sunflower/Sara Kendrick

8 Years Ago

Thanks for your kind review...Sara
This is a breathtaking piece of poetry to inhale and savor forever. It's just a magnificent and beautiful poem one could cherish forever!


Posted 9 Years Ago

I well crafted poem that sends its subtle message light an exhale in the wind. A very good poem. Nice work.

Posted 9 Years Ago

Smelt the fragrance of the rose.. Really spontaneous. Good luck

Posted 9 Years Ago

Amazing Haiku!
Real nice descriptions.

Posted 9 Years Ago

This piece is truly Breathless.... :)

Posted 9 Years Ago

What a wonderfully romantic piece.

Posted 9 Years Ago

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77 Reviews
Shelved in 4 Libraries
Added on May 12, 2010
Last Updated on April 19, 2011
Tags: Choka, love, nature, take your breath away
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