Under The Rose Trellis

Under The Rose Trellis

A Poem by Sunflower/Sara Kendrick

Choka, the longest of Japanese Haiku type poem...


                             Running Pale Pink Rose

                       On the trellis grows_soft scent

                             Wafts on morning air


                               Under rose trellis

                       You steal a kiss__Oh! Blissful

                            Lips that taste of rose


© 2011 Sunflower/Sara Kendrick

Author's Note

Sunflower/Sara Kendrick
Choka, written in response to competition that said leave me breathless..

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There is something special about a rose, a kiss, and a poem...
They are all rather "minuscule" in the grand scheme of things. Yet, they all have the power to change this world into a better place...
Much like you Sara as an author... Making the world a better place.

Posted 7 Years Ago

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Yes it did leave one breathless. Loved it.

Posted 9 Years Ago

Beautiful visions of roses and love! Yes in deed breath taking!

Posted 9 Years Ago

whoa, this is beautiful. This piece is short but the stories I can imagine from this piece are endless. It leaves me in a sort of blissful mood. Great write:) Im adding this

Posted 9 Years Ago

Nice work, I like this and the photograph makes the impact all the greater.

Posted 10 Years Ago

This is breathtakingly beautiful poetry at its best. I love it! You write so graciously with softly tuned words.

Posted 10 Years Ago

So short and sweet! To steal a kiss, loved the analogy!

Posted 10 Years Ago

This poem is beautiful and breathtaking all in one. I can smell the rose as I read, the imagery made it real. I love reading Haiku poems!

Posted 10 Years Ago

A stunner! Very nicely done. Simple, elegant, and sweet as a rose.

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Posted 10 Years Ago

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77 Reviews
Shelved in 4 Libraries
Added on May 12, 2010
Last Updated on April 19, 2011
Tags: Choka, love, nature, take your breath away
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