Under The Rose Trellis

Under The Rose Trellis

A Poem by Sunflower/Sara Kendrick
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Choka, the longest of Japanese Haiku type poem...

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                             Running Pale Pink Rose

                       On the trellis grows_soft scent

                             Wafts on morning air

                   

                               Under rose trellis

                       You steal a kiss__Oh! Blissful

                            Lips that taste of rose

 

© 2011 Sunflower/Sara Kendrick


Author's Note

Sunflower/Sara Kendrick
Choka, written in response to competition that said leave me breathless..

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There is something special about a rose, a kiss, and a poem...
They are all rather "minuscule" in the grand scheme of things. Yet, they all have the power to change this world into a better place...
Much like you Sara as an author... Making the world a better place.
Lovely!

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Yeah, haikus are very hard to write, and still have meaning to them. But this is a nice, eloquent write.

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Posted 11 Years Ago


Haikus are really hard to get perfect, I believe that you've
captured the skill quite intentfully and with a soft voice that
draws the reader to a wonderous contemplation, it's a beautiful poem :)

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Posted 11 Years Ago


aw, this is so sweet... like flowery perfume wafting through an english rose garden, ladies strolling by underneath their parasols, tea at noon... enchanting! :)

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Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

interesting write! it is a cute one!

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Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

awh. so pretty & pink. sweet and lovely. (:

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Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

What a sweet and flowery picture you paint, with your words! Sight, Smell, Taste all encompassed in your Choka!! I liked it!!! Now, that was some kiss!!!!

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Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

the taste of a rose and the softness that follows -- who could ask for more than that -- wonderful write

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Posted 11 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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Added on May 12, 2010
Last Updated on April 19, 2011
Tags: Choka, love, nature, take your breath away
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