Sunrise

Sunrise

A Poem by Sara
"

wake up, wake up

"

Sunrise

 

In the early morning

the slow awakening

peeks into her

consciousness

waiting for the starting

signal of a lazy yawn

and her smile.

 

© 2010 Sara


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oh I like this simplicity, it's quite endearing.

Posted 7 Years Ago


I love this... simple but i love how you wrote it for the morning, nice picture in this write.

Posted 8 Years Ago


A nicely penned "little" gem. Wonderful imagery.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Simple and short, yet incredibly beautiful and vivid. Wonderful imagery.

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Bee
Good description of Sunrise.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Wow--what a imagistic/creative short poem--I Love This One!!!

james:-)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Very sweet and gentle. There is nothing so wonderful as the woman's soft morning sigh. Well done.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Very expressive write short write..Good job..Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara

Posted 9 Years Ago


So few words capture so many rays of sunshine. Beauty collected and personified in "her" and the smile that adorns her face and the world once the sunrise lights up her face.

Nicely done.

Posted 9 Years Ago


This short seven line canvas of warmth says it all. Very Nice!

Art

Posted 9 Years Ago



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Sara
Sara

Dallas, TX



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Hi! I'm just a simple college student from Texas who enjoys storytelling in all its forms. I'm quite shy, so I find writing much easier than talking since I don't have to put up with my usual stutteri.. more..

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