Strawberry Fields Forever

Strawberry Fields Forever

A Poem by Sara
"

i know when it's a dream

"
Strawberry Fields Forever

Inside your body is a field of strawberries,
and I water it everyday.

The fragile leafy tendrils 
wrap around your spine, 
the budding fruit nestled
between 
each 
individual 
vertebrae.

Your tongue tastes of scarlet, 
tangs of acid. 
It leaves me happy, content, 
slightly shocked
like an infinity of summer days.

Inside me, you see rain,
replenished earth, the caressing
rays of the sun.
You look at me and see the sky,
endless and arching,
as everywhere as God.

© 2011 Sara


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Beautiful write i love how you said this, different, love the title, and the picture of the strawberries and heart as well.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Amazing and beautiful words. I read the poem a few times for the pleasure of the story and the strength of the word usage. Last lines I loved.
"You look at me and see the sky,
endless and arching,
as everywhere as God."
Thank you for your outstanding poetry.
Coyote


Posted 8 Years Ago


Very creative work..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Sunflower

Posted 8 Years Ago


Nothing short of amazing.
Every word, every description crafted perfectly.
This one's my favorite.

Posted 8 Years Ago


So beautiful. Images invoked in the poem are simply breath-taking. Reading it reminded me of feelings I experienced in the past. Wonderfully written. :D

Posted 8 Years Ago


This is so lovely, I enjoyed this write so much

Posted 8 Years Ago


This is so fresh, I love it! First of all, the song Strawberry Fields Forever is amazing. I think you have perfectly constructed this poem to be sweet and meaningful. Going into my favorites :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


Beautiful!

Posted 8 Years Ago



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Sara
Sara

Dallas, TX



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Hi! I'm just a simple college student from Texas who enjoys storytelling in all its forms. I'm quite shy, so I find writing much easier than talking since I don't have to put up with my usual stutteri.. more..

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