Hidden Walls

Hidden Walls

A Poem by Lyndy
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I't's about hidden barriers in life

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I've been running all my life
Never stopping for a rest
To the destination for the quest

I'm been searching all my life
For a new revival
And the meaning that can be

All this world has been spinning
And the journey's never ending
My life keeps revolving
Like a merry-go-round
That's never ending

I'm running all the way
I need a way out
From those hidden walls that surround me
I'm trying all the way 
I need a way to break free
From those hidden walls I see

That's never ending

© 2015 Lyndy


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I need a way to break free
From those hidden walls I see

That's never ending.

It reminding me a quote of famous Indian writer Rahul Sankrityayan, He said human nature is walking, and you dead if you are stop. Great write dear.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Lyndy

8 Years Ago

Thanks so much for your inspiring review, dear friend. :D
I feel a certain kind of connection between you and the poem. You just poured all your thoughts into such work of art. Keep it up.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Lyndy

8 Years Ago

Thanks a lot for the lovely review! :D
Nice poem, I can definitely relate to it.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Lyndy

8 Years Ago

Thanks a lot! :D
Life is all about running here and there.

A nice poem, with impressive rhyme scheme.

Thanks for sharing.

Devanshu

Posted 8 Years Ago


Lyndy

8 Years Ago

Thanks so much! :D
All of us are either running after or running from one thing or the other Lyndy.
A great form of expression :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Lyndy

9 Years Ago

Thanks so much, Nazia! :D
I can relate as will many others, this is well written and great flow!
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Lyndy

9 Years Ago

Thanks so much, James. :D
A beautiful piece of work of a pure heart who wants to find the hidden sense in everything. Great work!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Lyndy

9 Years Ago

Thanks so much, Ana! :D
The leitmotif of conducting one's own escapism has been well brought out.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Lyndy

9 Years Ago

Thanks, haha! ;)

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Lyndy
Lyndy

Kuala Lumpur, Malaysia



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