Darkness Within

Darkness Within

A Poem by Kaiko

I am a sinner

not worthy to live

but I can't escape

this darkness within.

 

This darkness

this hatred

this craving

it's all the same.

 

I hate myself

I envy others

but I won't quit

won't quit my fun

 

Confusion in my head

stop or continue

I never know

but I don't care enough

 

The guilt is slowly disappearing

that good or bad?

 

I crave the evil

I want it deep within

 

I now embrace it

this terrible sinning

 

I will go to Hell

happy as can be

© 2009 Kaiko


Author's Note

Kaiko
I wanted to switch the characters idea on evilness, but let me know if it's just plain confusing. Love the picture though.

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I think this was a great poem. It flowed and it really put the picture of evil that was in the character's mind in the readers mind (if that makes any sense. . .). I didn't think it was that confusing. I didn't know you were switching that characters idea on evilness until you told me in the author's note, but I don't think you need to switch the character's idea, for the poem is still good. Anyway, the poem was great!

Posted 11 Years Ago


yep, youre a dark one alright...jk! I really ejoyed this actually. Spaks the heart of most in my opinion.

Posted 11 Years Ago


------it does defy the outcome of good, great write, ---mishy

Posted 11 Years Ago


Very good poem. I liked it alot.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Let's face it, SIN feels good! It really does, and it is difficult to break free from. Many times I would rather just embrace the sins I commit rather than asking for forgivness... because I know I will just commit the sin again. You did an amazing job illustrating your point. Great write.

Posted 11 Years Ago



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