Did you ever?

Did you ever?

A Poem by Saraplenty

Did you feel it...

the moment I started pulling away,

after you bruised my heart with your push(ing)?


Did you see it...

how the light I saw in you vanished,

when the spark in your eyes for me dimmed?


Did you hear it...

the sound of my soul ache,

as I stopped hearing your desire for me?


Did you taste it...

the bitterness of my love tossed aside,

under the weight of the false semi-sweet?


Did you smell it...

once the salt from my tears dried,

amongst the dying ashes of our strong flame?


Did you ever really,

feel, see, hear, taste, smell,

breathe me....in?


Did you ever?

© 2011 Saraplenty

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Added on July 15, 2011
Last Updated on July 15, 2011



Dallas, TX

I am awesome. And sometimes, I vomit things on to paper to aid in breathing. I write for me, to release what it is I am feeling at that moment, and because I like turning those feelings into so.. more..