Dance in this storm

Dance with me in this rain, The downpour will be the tempo...

Dance with me in this rain,

Just you and me, 

 The downpour will be the tempo, 

And the thunder, the drums, 

 The lighting shall be paparazzi, 

 You can be the lead singer, 

And I'll hum along, 

Spin me around, 

 While the wind cheers us on, 

Whistling and yelling, 

Spin me in this turmoil, 

Dance with me in this storm

Author's Note

If its a revolution without dancing,
Its a revolution not worth having

Reviews

[The Immortal Phoenix]

(Jeff) Careful, if you dance in a storm you get struck by lightning. if you get struck by lightning it would be funny to watch. Dont worry though, your brain wouldnt be harmed, cus its already fried!

[LazerRays]

thank you, i know its already fried. haha. it doesnt take a moron to guess it. ;)
but i guess a moron already tired

[The Immortal Phoenix]

(Jeff) Ummm. I got nothing

[The Immortal Phoenix]

(Micky) How dare you, you fried my boyfriends brain.

[The Immortal Phoenix]

(Micky) You must pay.

[The Immortal Phoenix]

(Jeff) Micky dont, hes a retard, leave him be

[LazerRays]

she. im a she. hahahah. dont get yourself into stuff you cant control

[The Immortal Phoenix]

(Micky Oh she has earned himself a poem.

[The Immortal Phoenix]

(Micky) I know just how to rattle her cage

[LazerRays]

what? hahaha

[The Immortal Phoenix]

(Jeff) I think she rattled your cage

[LazerRays]

two people? haaha. who is who?

[The Immortal Phoenix]

(Keven) What are you two a*s hats up two now?

[The Immortal Phoenix]

(Micky) Nothing Papa *laughs* As if. we were just explaining to doufusburg over here why he shouldnt mess with peaple who are meaner then him

[The Immortal Phoenix]

(Jeff) this profile is shaired by three peaple, ME,Micky and keven. hopefully keven isint on.

[The Immortal Phoenix]

(Jeff) stupid lag

[LazerRays]

hmm. a very confused person- how sad. wish i could help ;)

[The Immortal Phoenix]

(Micky) only jeff seems to be confused at the moment

[LazerRays]

i like your poem about me- very cute

[The Immortal Phoenix]

(Micky) You'er not the only geek here i surprised the guys

[LazerRays]

;) haha. You really like trolling people, huh? hahaha

[The Immortal Phoenix]

(Micky) I could be more then a troller if I wanted to be. Key word wanted

[LazerRays]

haha. You have a heart of gold. you could have really torn me apart if your tried.

[LazerRays]

*you. hahah

[The Immortal Phoenix]

(Micky) you know being on this websights starting to change us. The more comments i read the less offensive our comments are.I think its humman interaction thats starting to change us

[LazerRays]

hahaha. i hope so

[LazerRays]

And you can try to tear me apart. I dare you. I'm invincible haha. You won't ever pull me down haha. So hit me with your best shot, wannabe

[grimfukle]

Very, very nicely written, well done.

[LazerRays]

Thank you :)

[CLR9]

This is actually good. I've read like eight thousand "why me darkness and death, people don't understand me like I" blah blah self masturbation and razors poems on this site. Do you like zombie?

[LazerRays]

Hahaha! Well, you won't find razors, masturbation, and no one loves me stuff in my poetry. My poetry is me against me. My battle caused by me. Mental disorders. I have bipolar so I resolve it by writing. You mean zombies like the monster? Or something else? Loti.

[CLR9]

I like zombie too.

[not your muse]

The drum of my heartbeats is calling for someone special.
I am dancing in the storm.

Hats off to you!

[LazerRays]

Thank you! Hats off to you too!

[Katelyn Kennedy]

This review may be biased because I love a great thunderstorm. It truly has a rhythmical touch to it and you capture it perfectly. You're able to tie serene human interactions together with the events of such a thing that could be seen as unpleasant in such a laconic poem. Thank you for sharing!

[LazerRays]

Thank you for your review! It means a lot!

[Onlyme]

Now this made me actually want it to thunder and lightning just to do as you said. It made my heart skip a beat and put a massive smile on my face. Reading this wonderful, light-hearted joyous poem.

[LazerRays]

Thank you! I love a good thunderstorm... Its so majestic and powerful

[Bacchus]

I love the downpour will be our tempo

[LazerRays]

Thank you roman version of Dionysus! Your so kind!

[phill..m]

Dance with me through our storm, the atmosphere of love, minds will retain,
Your poem inspired me to add a bit on. Great poem.

[LazerRays]

Thank you :)

[Bhavya verma]

I liked the viewpoint of this poem-optimism. Inspite of the bad weather, you take it as an opportunity to enjoy with your partner and regard each and every element of ill weather as the instruments of dance. A nice poem indeed!

[LazerRays]

Thank you!

[Dr. YumnaKay]

I like the lyrical quality here. Really adds to the feel of this write. To me, any relationship is a dance of sorts, you just gotta know how to go along with the beat!
Nice write.

[LazerRays]

Thank you!