Messages Through the Moon

Messages Through the Moon

A Poem by Sarah_Allen
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You were with the setting sun, 
Far from the stars I view, 
When you dream- I lay awake, 
Sending you messages through the moon, 

While the night kisses your eyelids, 
I'll wish to be there too, 
But it seems the closest we'll ever get, 
Is us both viewing the sky's moon, 

It's so unfair to be this way, 
and I know my thoughts are due, 
But lying in this darkness abyss, 
I'll send you messages through the moon

© 2019 Sarah_Allen


Author's Note

Sarah_Allen
Hmm... Me just being gooey I suppose...

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such a lovely write here, I love the moon and stars

Posted 7 Months Ago


Sarah_Allen

7 Months Ago

Me too :) thanks forstopping by worth that nice review
Thank God for the moon ... huh! Sometimes keeping the comversation going is what we seek more than anything.

Posted 7 Months Ago


Sarah_Allen

7 Months Ago

True true hahaha! Thank you again Allen, a pleasure to have you here :)
This is lovely and sweet, nice job :)

Posted 7 Months Ago


Sarah_Allen

7 Months Ago

Thank you angel! :D
angelink<allie>

6 Months Ago

You're welcome, I hope you are doing good.
Reminds me of lonewolf howling at the moon.
Very haunting, and passionate.

Posted 7 Months Ago


Sarah_Allen

7 Months Ago

Thanks Tony ;) is your name supposed to be like Tony Hawk or something? Hahaa thank you for the revi.. read more
Tony Mak

7 Months Ago

It's my pleasure. I dig your work.
My name is Tony Makosica, or just Tony Mak for short.
Sarah_Allen

7 Months Ago

Oh hahahaha my apologies! Though he is a fantastic skateboarder ;)
This is quite a romantic little write Sarah and I enjoyed it. Distance separating the lovebirds. That's how I read this, and the moon played a wonderful part. Nicely conveyed.

Chris

Posted 8 Months Ago


Sarah_Allen

8 Months Ago

Thank you for checking in, as always :) I am fine for now haha. Hope you're doing ok too! It means a.. read more
Christine Anne Shaw

8 Months Ago

Aw, well I'm pleased I do ask. It's good to know you are doing OK. That makes me smile as well. All .. read more
Sarah_Allen

8 Months Ago

Ah thank you again haha, enjoy yours too
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Rye
This is so pretty, I enjoy watching the moon and stars. It's fun to try and make images out of them. Very pretty write

Posted 8 Months Ago


Sarah_Allen

8 Months Ago

Thank you again for wonderful review! :D it is fun, isn't it?
This rocks, I love this piece. So well written and creative. Awesome penning here

Posted 8 Months Ago


Sarah_Allen

8 Months Ago

thank you! :D
oh i especially like the leave taking as he sets with the sun ... and she rises as the moon ... half way round the world our love can still be true eh!? as good ol' Einstein has shown ... time and distance are relative ;) i so enjoyed your "gooey" words Sarah ... they are gentle on me heart and mind
E.

Posted 8 Months Ago


Sarah_Allen

8 Months Ago

hahahahah I like the feeling i get from here too- like i finally belong to something...
Einstein Noodle

8 Months Ago

:) ................. me too
Sarah_Allen

8 Months Ago

:D hahahahaha yeah!
The moon usually reminds me of a big fat piece of cheese but the way you wrote this piece did make me forget my tumtum for a few moments and think of more humanistic things and I sit back and take another look at it instead of just drooling after it 😛. I dated a Tom once for no other reason than this and it all came back to me. All in the past though, now bring on a cheesecake any time! You’re near perfect here...pen on 🖊😺✒️

Posted 8 Months Ago


Sarah_Allen

8 Months Ago

hahahahahah cheese???? isnt that what mice think of? hmmmmm ;) hahahaha. Though, cheesecake is yumm.. read more
Dhara_Ditzy Kat

8 Months Ago

You’re welcome! This poem is a fine read indeed. Recommended for all cats!

Cheeseb.. read more
This actually is a very fantastic piece of work. Knowing you of what I do, this is so much in contrast of the real you and yet you picked and mimicked the emotions so well. Words have been placed beautifully and I just love this lines:

"When you dream- I lay awake,
Sending you messages through the moon, "

If you ask me, this is best of your work. Keep it up

Posted 8 Months Ago


Sarah_Allen

8 Months Ago

Well you see, I go by this "if you didn't feel; it isn't real" for poetry. And I have never written .. read more

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Added on January 30, 2019
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Tags: Love, seperation, heartbreak, moon, staying awake at night

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