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Heart of Judas

Heart of Judas

A Poem by Sarah_Allen
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Do you like it when I cut?
 I turned the knife on me as well,
 My wrists; they spell profanity, 
But you chained them in your cell,

 Do you like it when I scream?
 I tore my vocal cords to shreds, 
Calling out for God in tears, 
Swallowing each bullet that you fed, 

Did you like it darling, when I hurt? 
Did my back hurt your knife? 
Did it feel good deep inside, 
When you heard I took my life? 

Because I screamed at you, 
And bled for you, 
And tore my soul out all from you, 
 
How could you? 
 You made me hate me,
 Begging for you to save me.... 

 And my fire- is dying....

© 2019 Sarah_Allen


Author's Note

Sarah_Allen
Meh. Got the inspiration from Black Dahlia by Hollywood Undead....

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cut me deep,cut me wide,is it my pain that you need,watch me bleed

Posted 2 Months Ago


Sarah_Allen

2 Months Ago

Thank you wordman!
 wordman

2 Months Ago

you`re welcome
Oh my! Such a deep emotional read. powerful imagery. so nicely written

Posted 2 Months Ago


Sarah_Allen

2 Months Ago

Hey thank you! :D
Kesch

2 Months Ago

not a problem, it was very good
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Rye
WOW! So dark and so well expressed, really enjoyed this write

Posted 2 Months Ago


Sarah_Allen

2 Months Ago

Thanks So much :)
Dark and violent with its imagery, but these lines are so good. . Makes me think of a well known poet who took her own life. Keeo writing.

Chris

Posted 3 Months Ago


Sarah_Allen

3 Months Ago

You mean Sylvia Plath? Yeah I do like her, and I guess I was having an emotional breakdown while wri.. read more
Christine Anne Shaw

3 Months Ago

You are welcome.
so dark and disturbing. pain is a release. title, pic, wording, imagery - certainly gets the 'point' across (pun intended) ... :)

Posted 3 Months Ago


Sarah_Allen

3 Months Ago

THank you Pete :) that means a lot
Very dark, and I love you're style.

Posted 3 Months Ago


Sarah_Allen

3 Months Ago

Thank you :)))))
Creepy poem, creepy song. Im sorry now, holy crap this is dark, sorry I'm listening to the song now. It seems to speak to me.

Posted 6 Months Ago


Sarah_Allen

6 Months Ago

thank you so much
This is a brutal piece where she blames him for her demise as she cuts her way to relief and freedom and revenge it seems.

Posted 7 Months Ago


Sarah_Allen

7 Months Ago

yes yes, true true, thank you for your words here, John :)
The brutality and the harsh reality of a relationship gone wrong. But both don't walk away or give up on it. But seem to relish in the darkness and drawing of blood. Like those, it's one-upmanship. Tit for tat game. Mental games like this destroy lives. The destruction that is controlling and sick. But seem to also be a drug they both need and want. A twisted world for twisted people. Trapped in their own twisted minds.

Posted 7 Months Ago


Sarah_Allen

7 Months Ago

yes yes thats exactly that! im glad you could see that Dawn, thank you so much for the review :D
wow..blistering caustic relationships ... pain and attraction ,, affliction of ... the remission for .. all there in straight forward words ... V 1 L3 & 4 to me are especially hard hitting ... the image of her willing to give everything ..."wrists" offered then pulled by him into his own cell and chained is such a graphic image ..i can see it ..smell the dank of it ... its an illness ... bred from somewhere i do no know ... closing is poignant as that dim flicker of soul nears being extinguished ... your poem drew me in .. too many people, i imagine, are hooked on this kind of destruction :(((
E.

Posted 7 Months Ago


Sarah_Allen

7 Months Ago

thank you so much Einstein for reading :D

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Added on February 21, 2019
Last Updated on June 3, 2019
Tags: Anger, self-destruction, idk

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