WINGS OF LIFE

A short motivational poetry about life.

Moon says :

Wherever you go,i will come with you.

I didn't mean that i will be there for you.

But i mean that there's a inner path in you.

When you go through it, victory will be with you.

 

Cloud  says :

I may be in the sky,but my shadow is on the ground.

When you look at me,you can't see my shadow.

When you see my shadow,you can't look at me.

I want to say you that this is what life is,

When you look on your sorrow,you will not feel your joy.

When you look on your joy,you will not feel your agony.

 

Rain says :

I may fallen from the sky,but my fall will bring you joy.

I want to remind you that,i fall when dark clouds shuts down the sky.

When you raise up your hands,i will fall on you.

When you put your hands down,i will fall on the ground. 

I want to say you that this is what life is,

When agony shuts down the light of your life,faith will fall from you.

When you raise up your hand with courage,faith will fall on it.

When faith fallen on your hand,smile will fall from your mouth.

 

                                                     - FIN -

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Rounak Jain]

The message of cloud was awesome. Liked that the most.

[Saravanan Evu]

Thank you.

[Deepika]

Wow! Things like Moon and Rain are not just to fancy, but can be the sources to look up as Inspiration..Good one :)

[Saravanan Evu]

Thanks a lot.

[Zada Robbins]

I love this. I feel poetry is something you can play with freely and shape into what you want, keep it up!

[Saravanan Evu]

Thanks a lot.

[Surya pradha]

an interesting and entertaining poem. conveys a good message. well done.

[Saravanan Evu]

Thanks a lot.

[erframan]

Great and meaningful poem, I'm definitely touched :) amazing job!

[Saravanan Evu]

Thanks a lot.

[Jeffrey David]

This poem is immediately a favorite. I love the use of nature to express conditions of life. So much truth in your writing.

[Saravanan Evu]

Thanks for your Feedback.