Take my heart - 2016

Take my heart - 2016

A Poem by SariahM
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This is whatever you want it to be.

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Take my heart.
Take it away.
Don't bring it back,
Don't let it stay.

Let it bleed
Onto the sand.
I'll let it fall
Into your hand.

Hold it tight.
Let it flow.
With all your might,
Don't let go.

And once it stains
The golden sand,
Let it fall
To where I stand.

© 2017 SariahM


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I liked how you used the description.
"Let it bleed
Onto the sand.
I'll let it fall
Into your hand. "
Love can make us bleed and learn great need. Thank you Sariah for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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I loved this piece from the second you wrote it! the imagery was so powerful and moving and at times i find myself floating away to the words. thank you for your work and the words that have shown how i feel, but that i have not known how to say

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Poem with very heavy subject. But write is so nice flow and beauty. Thats wonderful.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I liked how you used the description.
"Let it bleed
Onto the sand.
I'll let it fall
Into your hand. "
Love can make us bleed and learn great need. Thank you Sariah for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love this. This got to me on how people give their everything into one person.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on May 31, 2016
Last Updated on December 10, 2017
Tags: Blood, sand, heart, take away, don't let go

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SariahM
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