A Mistake

A Mistake

A Poem by Divr

This is actualy written in a traditional form of poem in my country.It usually consist of one verse with four lines but it also can be use in a replying from like thsi. So basically this poem is about two bestfriend having a conversation


          A Mistake

Gazing at the cloud above

I see  shapless form, they make

My friend, these are words of love

I have made a mistake


See the shapless cloud

is not shapeless after al

Afraid of saying this

What mistake do you recall


The shapes you see

are nothing but a mind trick

Saying this, I want to flee

I stole your hot chick

© 2009 Divr

Author's Note

Remember, each verse is a dialog

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The last line made me laugh. You say it's dialogue, yet I see it just as a poem with lines that flow well. It's different and I enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing.

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Added on October 16, 2009



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