lonely night ahead

lonely night ahead

A Poem by sasha

Take off your gloves and hat

Take off your coat and shirt

Take off your shoes and socks

It’s time to go to bed

A lonely night ahead

© 2013 sasha


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Hahaha, simple, smooth and a touchable write you made. I liked your this shorty write :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


this is so good and such a surprise...a sad surprise...as we see it as one person inviting another...until the reflection at the end where the speaker is talking to him or herself.

well done.

Posted 7 Years Ago


sasha

7 Years Ago

I am so glad to receive your review, Jacob, it is always something special..
Love it!!!!! I like the flow of it. Keep up the great work

Posted 7 Years Ago


sasha

7 Years Ago

thank you so much for nice words, Wolflover!

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Munich, city centre, Germany



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