Leanin' Back & Chillin'

Leanin' Back & Chillin'

A Poem by Sasha
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it's early in the AM when the world is asleep, but when everything is a dream.

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Four minutes to the day.
I'm still up awake.
Rollin up, about to blaze.
Zoned out in this phase.

Bass thumping through the speakers
As Dre.'s beats begin to flow.
But the music's getting fainter
As i begin to lose control.

Blurry images all around,
As the world begins to spin
And suddenly now it's slow.
As the sweat trickles down my skin

Who is who?
What is what?
How am i here?
Where is this spot?

Not a care in the world.
No clue about time.
Just smoke in my eyes.
I'm doing just fine.


© 2011 Sasha


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nice write, and wonderful description about so early in the morning. you listen to Dr Dre? that's great! good job here!
P.S. For another song about early morning, albeit much sadder, try listening to "4:AM Forever" by Lostprophets, or better still watch the music video!

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Nice flow, I actually had to rap it lol keep it up!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

nice write, and wonderful description about so early in the morning. you listen to Dr Dre? that's great! good job here!
P.S. For another song about early morning, albeit much sadder, try listening to "4:AM Forever" by Lostprophets, or better still watch the music video!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I know that time when everything is a dream but you are kind of awake

i love this it is wonderfully written and peaceful as i said love it =)



Posted 10 Years Ago


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Reading this makes me so....in peace...and felt like....I want to...
sitting by the lake....and smoke weed....:P...

Nice captions...

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Added on August 29, 2010
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Sasha
Sasha

Gurgaon, Agnostic, India



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We just go on and on. living, dying and living again. Its what we do in those few blips of our existence in this universe that matters. Gandhi said, everything we do in our life will be insignificant.. more..

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