The Blank Paper

The Blank Paper

A Poem by Sasha
"

just a short verse.

"
Fill this paper up,
With words I don't know.
Write about pain.
Write it slow.
Feel each moment,
Don't let go.
Write about real pain,
Not the kind people normally show.
I'm talking about when you're alone,
And feel there is no falling,
Any further below.
Then when you run out of words,
Come back to me,
I'll give you some more.
Then write about that,
And the paper is filled up, OH No!

© 2010 Sasha


Author's Note

Sasha
What do you think??
criticize me, complement me. Either way, thank you. (:

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This is a very good poem. The rhyme scheme is clever but not too in your face. It's a good read

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

its a good poem...

Posted 10 Years Ago


I love this!
Allot of people in my life are hurting so this kind of hit a raw nerve
but it flows so smoothly and it made me think.
thanx


Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

When I can't write. I reach in and find pain. I read about the pain of others in old poetry. Nothing like a Neruda poem to open up the desire to write. The poem is more of motivation and thought. A excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 10 Years Ago


Hmmm... I really like this one...
It flowed smoothly and it really spoke to the reader...

And I love the idea...

Very good write...:)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on September 2, 2010
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Sasha
Sasha

Gurgaon, Agnostic, India



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We just go on and on. living, dying and living again. Its what we do in those few blips of our existence in this universe that matters. Gandhi said, everything we do in our life will be insignificant.. more..

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