Enough

 

Enough is enough

I am tired of feeling this way

My heart weighs too much to be carried around anymore

 

Everything you put me through

Everything you said to me

Everthing you did to me

 

Enough is enough

I take this sword that I have held on for so long, that I have hidden from you

I will fight back, I will no longer stay in darkness

 

Enough is enough...

 

Reviews

[Boldpen]

Bravo!!!
A very powerful write indeed. This one makes reader explore through your troubles and your determination to bring this all to end. Very impressive and soul thriving.
The spirit of poem is so strong that reader can clearly visualize the poet.
very nicely written.

[rosemary keogh]

Amazing! :)

[Searching 4 Serenity]

Aaaahh, I felt the energy from start to finish. Very raw and emotionally real while at the same time short and simple.
Btw, is this directed to an ex who was... controlling?

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oh yeah that's what im talking about! you go girl!!! :)

[Nihilum]

Amazing :)

[Cassie Fraga]

thats right sis!! fight back!! unleash the beast that hides in us all when pushed into corners of situation!! Powerful and suspenseful... gives me a hyped feeling of I am woman hear me ROAR!!! hahahahaha!!
keep the ink flowin mama your talent is appreciated!! = )

[xXxCynicalWarsxXx]

Powerful is the least of this write--NOT! It is breathtaking, astonishing, brave, determined, willing, and yes, powerful!! Always a great write! The way the words mesh together let's everyone who reads feel the emotions, and see what you see, fel how much enough is when enough is enough. This was wondrous in the ways of many! Absolutely amazing for such a short piece! Thank you for the post!

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Such a powerful write, staying true to oneself is what it is all about. Awesome!!

[smileyface123]

very strong i like it well done

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Staying strong! is all we have to do in this world. People don't like it, that's tough. Love this...it's truthful.

[Death Girl]

That is powerful. I love it.