This is why my head hangs low

This is why my head hangs low

A Poem by Sashalee

 

Things haven't been going so well for us

Time after time I grow so tired

I'm hung by a wire

 

My eyes are shut tight

 

I burned the bridges we once had

Every memory was so bad

 

I am tired

I am human

I don't deserve this

I don't need this

I can't want you anymore

 

 

© 2011 Sashalee


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Deep and full of emotion. Great poem! (as are all of your others).

*Side note: There are several grammatical mistakes...not sure if they're supposed to be there or not. Also, I don't quite understand the line "Im hung by a wired"...is it supposed to be wired or wire? Besides that, it was a great read :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Lovely poem! Short but just simply outstanding. I felt this way so many times... i lost count. lol.
You write well! It's so sad.. it aches with sadness but love is always gonna be like that. We get hurt by love but don't worry! Happiness will come again.. =)
So, put your head high! ^o^

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Deep and filled with emotions, always fulfilling and a great read.

Once, I was here. I was in this state and found it to be difficult. It's exhuasting to love someone and be forgotten about. The pain is always great and overwhelming, but don't worry-I told myself-little Miss Me will get through this! Sure enough...everythting collapsed before I got to get through it. Found out that it wasn't the world or Him or anyone else who destroyed what We had, just me and my insecurities. But that's not the point. Point is, we all want to fight for what we want so badly, but in the end, we ARE tired, we ARE human, and we don't deserve to wear ourselves out. We should always fight for what we want, but take a break and renew. Think it over.

This poem made me realize that everyone does struggle, and no one is ever on their own. Great write, no, excellent, outstanding, astonishing write. For just the short words, you held the emotions. Nicely done.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow. This poem is so relatable. So simple, yet beautiful and very sad. Great write.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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What makes this so sweet is its length. I love this poem a lot. "I can't want you anymore." What a strong, commanding line.

Posted 9 Years Ago


I like this. It is more in what you aren't saying than what is being said. Deep and touching. I like this.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Deep and full of emotion. Great poem! (as are all of your others).

*Side note: There are several grammatical mistakes...not sure if they're supposed to be there or not. Also, I don't quite understand the line "Im hung by a wired"...is it supposed to be wired or wire? Besides that, it was a great read :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very heartfelt.
Simple bur firm (Your specialty)
The spirit of this poem is a brilliant composition of regret, sadness, strength and will.
Congrats on another great creation.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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