Black paper moon

Black paper moon

A Poem by Sashalee

I have so much pain in me
But their so blind to see
I grin through it all
Hoping one day I won't fall
My heart is withered and old
My skin is pale and my eye's are cold
I walk with my head down
I talk but there is no sound
Things aren't going well for me 
Then again..
You don't see what I see

© 2011 Sashalee


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i can definitely relate great metaphors

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Awww wow, I can relate to this poem so well!!!! Amazing! So much pain! -sigh- I know how it feels...
Quite short but a powerful piece. =) Well done!

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Always captivating to a chilling tone.
Toushed the marrows of my bones in a grasp so suffocating at the relization that I've felt like this before, i too many times.

Posted 9 Years Ago


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gah! captivation of heart!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :) great job.

Posted 9 Years Ago


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I love it :)
Powerful.

I love souleater! :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Leaves me wondering what I don't see. Intriguing and metaphorical.

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Extremely lovable piece.
The flow touched my heart. It was sooo impressive!
The feelings were tracing right to my soul.
Very well done!

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Sashalee
Sashalee

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