Kissing Silk

 

Your arms fill the gaps of my body

My head rest on your shoulder

You are so warm...

 

I close my eyes

You close yours as well

 

I feel your lips on my neck

I feel your breathing

I feel your heart

 

Your lips make its way towards my cheek

I smile

Now your lips are pressed against mine

 

Your lips are so soft

Your lips fit perfectly with mine

Your lips are silk...

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Rea]

you portrayed the imagery beautifully here. I felt it!!! felt like something was tugging at my heart when i read this, in a good way:) this is a beautiful piece of writing in the sense that, love and passion is something that everybody can put to words, but to give a soul to your writing, to give feeling to it that's something not many excel at, and you have managed to do that.

[Dylan S.]

It's amazing how you can make such a simple moment sound so extraordinary. I love this poem because of its imagery. They say a picture is worth a thousand words, and I'm seeing plenty of pictures here.

[Nihilum]

It's beautiful and SILKY :3