You and I

You and I

A Poem by Sashalee
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Something I just through together

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Every day I spend with you is a new adventure
You take me to a place I have never been

You give me little kisses here and there
You run your fingers through my hair
You give me the warmest hugs
You always call me beautiful 
I wish I can just freeze time,
so you can be forever mine

© 2011 Sashalee


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I really like this poem! It is very beautifully written.
You also capture emotions and creates effective imagery!
There is something charming about this poem too- short and sweet.
The words are simple but are powerful.
Great work.
I hope to read more of your writings
~Happy Writing!~
-Susan

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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A very sweet and well written poem. It had a good flow to it and it didn't have any flaws that I noticed. Overall, this was a good poem.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I really like this poem! It is very beautifully written.
You also capture emotions and creates effective imagery!
There is something charming about this poem too- short and sweet.
The words are simple but are powerful.
Great work.
I hope to read more of your writings
~Happy Writing!~
-Susan

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love, love, LOVED this Poem! Very beautiful. Keep it up!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

As Beautiful as always.... Loved your write.. Simply wonderful.
The feelings were as usually strong and words wonderfully defined.
Congrats again, on this wonderful write.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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how charming your poems they always make me smile :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

True compassion is shed in this short poem but it's very brute about your love. Keep up the Wonderful poem telling!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A simple, delicate ode to love. Very nice.

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Woah, simple but true. I Get the same feelings and emotions when I'm with my partner C:
Beautiful. Simply lobely. Very well written!

Posted 9 Years Ago


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This is really cute :3
I love it!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Aww :) Sweet poem. Nicely written!

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Sashalee
Sashalee

, La La Land



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My name is Sasha and I am 18 years old. I love to draw and im a huge game freak; I write short stories and poems on my free time :) more..

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