You and I

Something I just through together

Every day I spend with you is a new adventure
You take me to a place I have never been

You give me little kisses here and there

You run your fingers through my hair

You give me the warmest hugs

You always call me beautiful 

I wish I can just freeze time,
so you can be forever mine

Reviews

[Susan]

I really like this poem! It is very beautifully written.
You also capture emotions and creates effective imagery!
There is something charming about this poem too- short and sweet.
The words are simple but are powerful.
Great work.
I hope to read more of your writings
~Happy Writing!~
-Susan

[ATG]

A very sweet and well written poem. It had a good flow to it and it didn't have any flaws that I noticed. Overall, this was a good poem.

[PokemonFan#1]

I love, love, LOVED this Poem! Very beautiful. Keep it up!

[Boldpen]

As Beautiful as always.... Loved your write.. Simply wonderful.
The feelings were as usually strong and words wonderfully defined.
Congrats again, on this wonderful write.

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how charming your poems they always make me smile :)

[André-J-Franklin]

True compassion is shed in this short poem but it's very brute about your love. Keep up the Wonderful poem telling!

[Dylan S.]

A simple, delicate ode to love. Very nice.

[THE Super Hero]

Woah, simple but true. I Get the same feelings and emotions when I'm with my partner C:
Beautiful. Simply lobely. Very well written!

[Nihilum]

This is really cute :3
I love it!

[Ami N.]

Aww :) Sweet poem. Nicely written!