It's not me, its you

It's not me, its you

A Poem by Sashalee

I feel so tired
My feet drag behind me

You drain me

Everything you do,
Every little thing you say,
I cant take it anymore

I thought maybe it was me
Maybe I needed to change
But now I know

It was you all along

© 2012 Sashalee


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Realization is the critical point. Once that has passed a feeling of ease follows and this poem shows how sometimes something or someone can be so draining that it consumes so much of your being that all that's left is a half life, losing grip in every sense. Realization is the key to taking back a hold of life, great poem, good read. Short but meaningful.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Intuition plays a big part. Sometimes we know it all along but don't want to admit it.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Some days i thought this but then i can't wait to say it's not you it me. but this right here is extremely deep if someone draining you it's not worth it.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is such a nice poem! It is short and simple. Very blunt- and very relate-able. A job well done! I am looking forward to more!

Susan
Happy Writing!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Short, simple, and good.
Vey streight forward.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Now that was what I call too much in too little.
You have nailed it! Brilliantly done. The strength of this piece is fantastic... Great Job once again.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A very strong feel of emotion. Beautiful work of art!
Keep it up!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Great write! Short, simple, straight forward and also very strong to the reader.
I love this. =)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Another great piece of writing!!
I love it!
o 3o

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

mmmmhhhmmm.... get the hell away from it chica!!! very nice write!!!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Sashalee
Sashalee

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My name is Sasha and I am 18 years old. I love to draw and im a huge game freak; I write short stories and poems on my free time :) more..

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