It's not me, its you

I feel so tired

My feet drag behind me

You drain me

Everything you do,

Every little thing you say,

I cant take it anymore

I thought maybe it was me

Maybe I needed to change

But now I know

It was you all along

Reviews

[KeeD]

Realization is the critical point. Once that has passed a feeling of ease follows and this poem shows how sometimes something or someone can be so draining that it consumes so much of your being that all that's left is a half life, losing grip in every sense. Realization is the key to taking back a hold of life, great poem, good read. Short but meaningful.

[Tim]

Intuition plays a big part. Sometimes we know it all along but don't want to admit it.

[André-J-Franklin]

Some days i thought this but then i can't wait to say it's not you it me. but this right here is extremely deep if someone draining you it's not worth it.

[Susan]

This is such a nice poem! It is short and simple. Very blunt- and very relate-able. A job well done! I am looking forward to more!

Susan
Happy Writing!

[Draven]

Short, simple, and good.
Vey streight forward.

[Boldpen]

Now that was what I call too much in too little.
You have nailed it! Brilliantly done. The strength of this piece is fantastic... Great Job once again.

[PokemonFan#1]

A very strong feel of emotion. Beautiful work of art!
Keep it up!

[Sleeping Maiden]

Great write! Short, simple, straight forward and also very strong to the reader.
I love this. =)

[Nihilum]

Another great piece of writing!!
I love it!
o 3o

[Cassie Fraga]

mmmmhhhmmm.... get the hell away from it chica!!! very nice write!!!