Remnants of Symphony

Remnants of Symphony

A Poem by SasukiMimochi
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Listen to 'Dolls' by rin kagamine.

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Strong notes of Imagery
Dance past my ears
A love recovery
Beautifully appears.
Hold crystal remnants
Kiss each flicker till it shines
Receive the shape of crescents
With all the fine lines.
Fill with remnant quotes
Drink the deep sound
Then sing till it all floats
And wait till they surround.
Resplendent, unrestrained
Brilliant Hues of intensity
Even though i stained
My remnants of Symphony.

© 2010 SasukiMimochi


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i read this twice to gain full meaning, this is definitely a unique approach to the topic. your remnants of symphony... how interesting, it kind of simmers in my mind, like it's powerful, yet im not quite sure what message im supposed to get.

understanding the profound sense of pain that a recovery from love is, sometimes it can be difficult. my favorite time during this was when you explained crystal remnants. well done!

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Beautiful notes that take on a life of their own. It reminds me of a song I used to sing, but I forgot it.

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Posted 8 Years Ago


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This porm really caught my eye and my heart. Great Work!

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i read this twice to gain full meaning, this is definitely a unique approach to the topic. your remnants of symphony... how interesting, it kind of simmers in my mind, like it's powerful, yet im not quite sure what message im supposed to get.

understanding the profound sense of pain that a recovery from love is, sometimes it can be difficult. my favorite time during this was when you explained crystal remnants. well done!

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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It is a mystery!, TN



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