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A Poem by Saurin Corvinus
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This is a very short poem i wrote while in detention one day on a napkin.

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I gave my blade to a brotherhood
I gave my heart to my love
I gave my soul to the crude
And my mind to a dove

© 2009 Saurin Corvinus


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I agree with Alyssa, this short poem could mean a lot of different things and anybody can relate to it.

Posted 11 Years Ago


I love this, its short, but very powerful.
It leaves the reader thinking and evaluating what each sentence means.
There are so many meanings, its great :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Saurin Corvinus
Saurin Corvinus

Susanville, CA



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I'm a 18 year old ready for the world ahead of me. I mainly write poems and songs but I'll delve into a story every once in a while. I am a Martial artist, and I just started parkour. As you ca.. more..

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