I wonder... If I could

Just a simple love poem

I wonder when your hurt
If I could just help
I wonder when your scared
If you could be in my arms
I wonder when you cry
If I could be your shoulder
I wonder when you fall
If I could catch you
I wonder when your nervous
If I could hold your hand
I wonder when you read this
If I could tell you I love you

 

Author's Note

I know there is no real rhythm but I like it and I hope you will to.

Reviews

[Fanciful Goddess]

I realy like this poem...straight from the heart and innocent.

[barricade]

I really like this one...innocent and straight from the heart...don't worry about the rhythm...you did a nice job here...expressing your feelings in a subtle manner...not going overboard...just a perfectly balanced write...it's beautiful :-)

keep it up!

regards
Barricade...