I wonder... If I could

I wonder... If I could

A Poem by Saurin Corvinus
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Just a simple love poem

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I wonder when your hurt
If I could just help
I wonder when your scared
If you could be in my arms
I wonder when you cry
If I could be your shoulder
I wonder when you fall
If I could catch you
I wonder when your nervous
If I could hold your hand
I wonder when you read this
If I could tell you I love you


 

© 2009 Saurin Corvinus


Author's Note

Saurin Corvinus
I know there is no real rhythm but I like it and I hope you will to.

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I realy like this poem...straight from the heart and innocent.

Posted 13 Years Ago


I really like this one...innocent and straight from the heart...don't worry about the rhythm...you did a nice job here...expressing your feelings in a subtle manner...not going overboard...just a perfectly balanced write...it's beautiful :-)

keep it up!

regards
Barricade...

Posted 13 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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Saurin Corvinus
Saurin Corvinus

Susanville, CA



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I'm a 18 year old ready for the world ahead of me. I mainly write poems and songs but I'll delve into a story every once in a while. I am a Martial artist, and I just started parkour. As you ca.. more..

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