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Thoughts Confined Inside

Thoughts Confined Inside

A Poem by Savannah Bly
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Silence is golden. In lines and confusing metaphors.

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Thoughts Confined Inside

I speak too much
In lines and confusing metaphors
My silence I should tightly clutch
And watch you smile, as you confine my thoughts deep inside---
And slam shut the doors

© 2014 Savannah Bly


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"I speak too much
In lines and confusing metaphors
My silence I should tightly clutch
And watch you smile, as you confine my thoughts deep inside---
And slam shut the doors"


Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A wonderful poem on confining our thoughts and to who we should share the confiding ones...Excellent...:)...........

Posted 7 Years Ago


Savannah Bly

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much Sami! :)
Sami Khalil

7 Years Ago

You are welcome...:)....................
Amazing poem keep up the great work i can't wait to read more

Posted 7 Years Ago


Savannah Bly

7 Years Ago

Thank you!
melissa

7 Years Ago

You're welcome
oooh i like this...i shouldn't have to say anything at all...i don't need to speak...my thoughts should be locked deep inside you without me penning them or verbalizing them...we are one.

and maybe words just do confuse the issue.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Savannah Bly

7 Years Ago

Wow, I agree. Nicely put and thanks for the review Jacob! :)
Silence can, indeed, be just as beautiful and timely as a well chosen metaphor....for silence speaks just as loudly (sometimes louder) than words. Beautiful, insightful write, dear Savannah!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Savannah Bly

7 Years Ago

Thank you! :)
Oh how I feel this one currently. One must choose carefully with whom to not share thoughts and feelings--just as long as one also chooses someone within whom to confide. Very well done!

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Savannah Bly

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much! :)

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Tags: me, speaking, poetry, metaphors, confinement, deep, thoughts, inside, confusing, watch, tightly, inner ramblings, truth, life, death, poetic tragedy, silence, spoken, words, sentences

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Savannah Bly
Savannah Bly

Wichita, KS



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Hi, my name is Savannah. I am originally from the West Coast but live in Kansas now. I love to write and I love to read; one of my current majors is Creative Writing. I have a blog I am restarting soo.. more..

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