Midnight Sky Cry Rain

Midnight Sky Cry Rain

A Poem by Savannah Bly
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I was wearing dark blues and greys.

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Midnight Sky Cry Rain
I sat next to the window
Plugged into the twenty-first century
The Earth I knew
Had become dry
I was wearing dark blues and grays
Just praying for release
From this summer heat
I sat frozen in thought
Only moving to look in the mirror
Across the room
Pouring rain
Darkened sky
Purple lightning
Dark blue night
Black clouds
The trees, midnight forest green
The night had gone beautiful
Rain pouring from sweet heavens
Midnight sky cry rain
While the mirror across the room
Showed the happenings from the window
I was stuck,
Plugged into the time of this world
I lost the memory
The transcendentalist in me
The beauty of nights darkest skies
The sound of pouring rain
I am truly home,
When and where it rains

© 2014 Savannah Bly


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I love the rain, too. It moistens, rejuvenates, heals, and quenches thirsty crops, thirsty grass, thirsty minds tired from too many days of interaction. The rain almost acts as a curtain that comes down allowing a temporary intercession to the play of your life. No one calls or comes over in the rain...You can just breath and relax. No work, no running, no tv, no cooking...no one expects anything in the rain...It's a beautiful, but temporary respite from the expectations of the day. Very nice, write, Savannah...:)

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Savannah Bly

6 Years Ago

Thank you for such a great review! :)



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I love the rain, too. It moistens, rejuvenates, heals, and quenches thirsty crops, thirsty grass, thirsty minds tired from too many days of interaction. The rain almost acts as a curtain that comes down allowing a temporary intercession to the play of your life. No one calls or comes over in the rain...You can just breath and relax. No work, no running, no tv, no cooking...no one expects anything in the rain...It's a beautiful, but temporary respite from the expectations of the day. Very nice, write, Savannah...:)

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Savannah Bly

6 Years Ago

Thank you for such a great review! :)
I love how colorful your vision of the night is.

I too love the rain and appreciated the lovely visuals.

My favorite line is also the title.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Savannah Bly

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much! :)
I really enjoyed reading this poem today. It was extremely thought creating and deeply written. Great job on this.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Savannah Bly

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much for your great review! I am so glad you liked it.
Rain is truly magical in those peaceful nights coming from sweet heavens. It makes us transcend in thoughts and emotions...Bravo...............

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Savannah Bly

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much Sami!! :)
Sami Khalil

7 Years Ago

You are welcome...:)..........................
I like this poem very much! A night of pouring rain and lighting, which made for a beautiful night!!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Savannah Bly

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much! :)
a nice peaceful moment here...almost as if the sky is crying for her so that her mind can go elsewhere besides into memory of heartbreak.

i like the reflection of what is outside the window, in the mirror...
the speaker staring at the reflection, rather than staring out the window..
it's like second hand thoughts....just reflections of the real thing.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Savannah Bly

7 Years Ago

Thank you for your great remarks and review Jacob! Beautiful thought on the reflection of the window.. read more

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Added on May 24, 2014
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Tags: rain pour, dark, cry, cries, sky, midnight, trees, summer, frozen, nature, memory, forgotten, mirror, happenings, window, lightning, heavens, Earth, dry, beautiful, rain, clouds

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Savannah Bly
Savannah Bly

Wichita, KS



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Hi, my name is Savannah. I am originally from the West Coast but live in Kansas now. I love to write and I love to read; one of my current majors is Creative Writing. I have a blog I am restarting soo.. more..

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