Collision

two different people, one fatal future

I was looking to fall

and you were looking to fly

And somewhere in between; take off and arrivals we collided.

Instant combustion, fatal attraction. 

A fire no Halon could put out

Sparks coating debri everywhere,

making this mess glisten.

Something no one could ignore,

Miracle like; attention galore 

Author's Note

feeling inspired by this pain

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Very nice. You made the words dance with skill and create good vision.The collisions of life. Some are miracles and some are uncontrolled hurricanes. I like complete poem. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[SavyNess]

I sincerely appreciate your comments, very genuine and constructive! Thank you very much. I do my best and it was my pleasure to share this with you.

[Coyote Poetry]

I enjoyed your work. I'm off to sleep. I work the night shift. Please send read requests and you are welcome.

[SavyNess]

Have a great night, I look forward to reading some of your work, I will leave my comments for when you are free.
Sleep well.

[Ashadan]

Something no one could ignore,
Miracle like; attention galore

Short yet inspiring poem of life. The poem suggests a message about pain, could also be love then at the end it turns out to provide miracle. ^_^

[SavyNess]

Absolutely, thank you very much. I appreciate It.

[Ashadan]

You're always welcome. Hope to read more about your write-ups